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Apr 18, 2008 00:25


a little less 16 candles, a little more touch me, 2006
the sacrifice of life; living well is the best revenge (part two)
travis / william, gabe / william, 4599 words (nc17)

-- i still remember the days when you didn't feel the need to escape and every demon you never face is the reason you're not safe; please understand that you've had every ( Read more... )

gabe / william, fanfic, fbr ensemble, travis / william, bandom, series, sacrifice of life

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totally_loca April 17 2008, 18:51:09 UTC
Aaaah!! I love this so much! I have to go training and I'm so nearly finished, but I thought I'd tell you anyway how much I adore this. They are all so perfect. I am actually in love with your Gabe.

I will be back soon with more proper comment and worship. :D

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divvy April 18 2008, 01:58:02 UTC
i am actually in love with you ;]

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divvy April 18 2008, 01:58:44 UTC
my friend made fun of me a lot because the integrity of the fic changed midway. it was supposed to be a completely in love with travis but has a deep seeded loyalty to gabe and the dandies fic and he and travis were actually supposed to sneak around behind everyone's back but it didn't work out that way

it turned into a william loves both of them equally but apparently has more sex and spends more time with gabe and in the end, they are definitely sharing him. he'll go back to the manor and be with gabe for all eternity

i agree with epic

there is an incredibly heartbreaking scene between gabe and william that i had to leave out because it would have completely blown treckett out of the water but it will be in the deleted scenes

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divvy April 18 2008, 02:06:31 UTC
so you don't have to wait (it's right after the world is changed because you are made of ivory and gold ( ... )

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hello_ilu April 17 2008, 21:19:50 UTC
(because william always complains that drinking out of the plastic hospital pouches is weird, whereas brendon drinks them with a straw like it's capri sun or something)
oh i love you

MIMES.

ryan's mouth completely misses the grape and it hits him in the eye.
aaaaaaaaahahahaha

"probably not, i'd make the butcher do it."
.......oh hi you're perfect

THEMED COVENS. CLUELESS RYAN ROSS. MIME BABIES. ughhhh i love you.

"you don't have to do anything, okay, you can sit in the corner and sip tea for all i care."
heh.

....god, you may be single-handedly responsible for me loving gabe/william as much as i do.

TRAVIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

so she can't spell simple words and messes up basic sentence structures, but at least she understood the code.
ahahahahahaha

i want to give brendon a hug. D:

"i would gladly, blindly follow you two lovesick puppies to my death any day."GOD I THINK I JUST FELL IN LOVE. EITHER WITH YOU OR BRENDON. OR BOTH ( ... )

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divvy April 18 2008, 02:04:27 UTC
i love all the little people in this fic like ashlee and audrey's bad spelling and i especially love brendon so i am glad you enjoyed those parts too

i think i am singlehandedly responsible for making myself like gabe and william WHYYYY

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totally_loca April 17 2008, 23:54:59 UTC
Ok, I lied. I don't have proper comment. But worship, oh God yes. I actually absolutley adore you. I love the entire of this so so so much. Your characterisation of them all is just so yummy and so many of your lines make me flail hysterically, so darn funny.

Gabe centred is just as good as William centred. *nods* I have so much love for this I cannot tell you.

The bit where towards the end where Gabe pushes William to Travis is just beautiful. It's kinda painful but in a soft way, if that makes any sense. And the end, the end is just perfect. Ashlee is definitely growing on me.

Now I want more about Pete and that lot, :D. And am sooooo looking forward to your deleted scenes/bloopers.

Thank you so much for a thoroughly enjoyable read. :D

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divvy April 18 2008, 01:57:37 UTC
i had to balance out the funny with the killing! otherwise it would have been too cringy

i pretty much always say it but gabe is the most selfless most amazing character i write, i don't know why but that's just the way i see him, he's always trying to make other people happy

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justhush April 18 2008, 02:39:38 UTC
THIS IS THE BEST VAMPIRE AU I'VE EVER READ.

I love this. It's wonderful. .ed,lfmlnmasd.

MEM'D. -dies-

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divvy April 18 2008, 02:57:16 UTC
this is the best comment i have ever read, you make me feel s special

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justhush April 18 2008, 02:59:15 UTC
You are special! I mean that completely earnestly. Like if Gerard Way told you that, as opposed to Ryan Ross being mean and sarcastic about it. :D

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divvy April 18 2008, 03:02:40 UTC
i love that comparison because yeah, ryan would say it to brendon whereas gerard would say it to an audience of fans and proceed to throw flowers at them

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