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Drabble: Hailstorm Fury

Nov 05, 2006 23:59

I didn't half leave this one till the last minute. But here's my stab at a Bonfire Night, fireworks inspired drabble.

( Hailstorm Fury )

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callistosh65 November 6 2006, 07:24:16 UTC

Such great imagery to latch onto for Doyle - the "sound and fury" of a storm ( I've always loved that phrase). And then the "stillness" when it's over. Very nice.

przed November 6 2006, 11:55:56 UTC

I didn't want to drop the ball on this drabble, since it was such a perfect prompt for Doyle. So glad you think it worked. And that you liked the pinching of the "sound and fury."

kiwisue November 6 2006, 08:08:45 UTC

Very vivid. I liked the imagery

przed November 6 2006, 11:56:53 UTC

Thanks. It was a nail biter, getting it finished, but I'm glad I pushed through and did it.

bistokidsfan77 November 6 2006, 10:05:03 UTC

Great word picture, and it fits Doyle to a T!

przed November 6 2006, 11:57:24 UTC

That prompt was just so Doyle I couldn't resist it.

rosie55 November 6 2006, 10:51:02 UTC

Lovely - "with Doyle the one still point" - great contrasts and feeling!

przed November 6 2006, 12:00:59 UTC

Thank you. The contrasts in Doyle's character are one of the things I love about him.

myrebelcat November 6 2006, 12:17:04 UTC

Oh, I loved your word choices! Especially "sprogs" - that brings back memories. My firstborn was called "sproggie" for most of her first six years of life.
Terrific analogy for Doyle - ties right in neatly with the day.

przed November 6 2006, 12:20:46 UTC

I can't help but like "sprogs," and it just went with "sparklers" so well. ;)