No Notes by Slantedlight

[byslantedlight]

I'm not really sure this is a good idea, and I am absolutely invoking Pago Pago time (it's four minutes to midnight on the 31st August there, as I type this), but I really wanted to post something for this challenge (even if I'm sure it's not at all what jaycat92 or cornishcat had in mind for the theme

Comments

[msmoat]

Well, that was a nice slice of their life--evocative and real. You do seem to have a thing about them tied up and cold in basements. *g* But it works! I like the notebook theme, and Doyle's addition. *g* Thank you for sharing this!

[byslantedlight]

It's usually Doyle, I think, but this time Bodie in the basement... *g* I dunno, it seems a bit sketchy to me, I think I've got too used to writing longer stories, I'm not sure I can write shorter pieces any more! But thank you! *g*

[gilda_elise]

Good story! I like that their emotions are still very strong and very evident, no matter that they're not sexually together... yet. ;-)

[byslantedlight]

Well thank you, though it still feels a bit sketchy to me, somehow - there should have been more! Very glad it worked for you, though! *g*

[bodiecuddle]

this is well written. I like a wounded, hurt Bodie. I love the story.

[byslantedlight]

Well thank you! I tend to wound and hurt Doyle more often, but it was Bodie this time... *g*

[snailbones]

That was great fun... I love the theme of the notebook, and the running jokes, and the scoring off one another with the girlfriends. And you can tie them up in cold basements as often as you like, thank you!

[byslantedlight]

There's just something about the cold, and the dark, and the... but I must try to vary things more, that's at least three basements now - though usually it's been Doyle stuck down there... *g*

And thank you!

[solosundance]

Lovely! Crisp and characterful (heh, like a nice bottle of ... oh something). And erm... tied up and cold in basements... what's not to like?

[byslantedlight]

Crisp and characterful
Heee - and also, thank you! *g*

I must admit, the whole dark thing and the cold thing, and the tied-up thing... yeah... *g*