HOW AM I DOING?
Is Seifer spot-on, or could he use a little work? I try my best to put 100% into my characterization, but you know how it goes - sometimes little slip-ups happen. So tell me what you think. Don't be harshly critical, of course, because that doesn't really give me the help I may need. You gotta use the CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, kidlets ( Read more... )