Comments | disarm_d: befalls the flawless | Spencer/Brendon | NC-17 | ~ 6400 words

disarm_d

befalls the flawless | Spencer/Brendon | NC-17 | ~ 6400 words | AU |

Oct 27, 2007 00:02

befalls the flawless
Spencer/Brendon | NC-17 | ~ 6400 words | AU |
Brendon plays guitar on Madonna's new album, keyboards for Gwen Stefani, and drums for Justin Timberlake. When The Summer League asks if he'll play bass for them, he says, "Sure. I'll be available on Monday."

This is for Life Imitates Music. My prompt: AFI "The Leaving Song Pt ( Read more... )

pairing: spencer/brendon, exchange, fic, au

Comments 99

mandy_croyance October 27 2007, 04:39:07 UTC

Pairings aside, you still know how to push my buttons. Brendon the studio musician who plays on pop albums? Secretive relationships? All made of very much win in my books, bb.

Just a minor typo: Spencer whispers in his ear, low and filthy, "Want to fuck you, okay?What to bend you over and--". Should be want, I think.

disarm_d October 27 2007, 19:28:46 UTC

I'm glad you liked it despite the pairing and the typo. Thanks!

withoutmaps October 27 2007, 04:44:52 UTC

I love what you've done with this, the little world you created here. Seriously, Brendon as a studio musician will never cease to be amazing. He's just, I love him so.

Also, the massage outside the studio is probably one of my favorite parts. (And the car, inside the car is awesome!) I like that they're getting closer, more intimate, and it just seems so comfortable.

And Brendon on cello? NGH. ALL MY DREAMS HAVE COME TRUE, THANK YOU FOR THAT. *FLAILS*

<33333

disarm_d October 27 2007, 19:31:04 UTC

Uggggggggggg. Brendon play instruments. Uggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg. I want a feature length video of Brendon playing everything he knows how to play. That would be better than porn. That WOULD BE porn. Oh god.

*blinks*

Anyways, thaaaaaaaaaank you. And thank you for reading the slopping beginning stages of this and listening to me whine about it! <3<3<3

makesomelove October 27 2007, 05:03:09 UTC

Looooove this! Just, awwww, and it's a little hopeful at the end and everything.

disarm_d October 27 2007, 19:31:39 UTC

I'm really glad that you liked it! The person requested a hopeful ending, so *fingers crossed*.

warmingweather October 27 2007, 05:05:24 UTC

I'm on my way out the door and I just skimmed this really quickly, but- eeee! ♥ ♥ Consider this a placeholder for proper feedback, which will come as soon as I get a chance to reread for read.

disarm_d October 27 2007, 19:32:06 UTC

Okay! Awesome! \o/

<3<3<3

warmingweather October 28 2007, 04:16:55 UTC

Okay, so, aghhhh this story killed me. I spent the whole time, both times I read it, hoping so hard that everything would work out for Brendon and Spencer. There was such a delicate balance, and then Spencer just kept PUSHING and I just kept hoping and ughhhhh. This is not real, but it felt like it.

How much to I love how they keep talking about "losing" Brent? Thiiis much: ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ x infinity. The euphemisms people use can be so revealing, and in this case it felt perfectly in character and a little heartbreaking.

I adored the premise of this story and the execution and, as always, your Brendon made me want to give him the world's biggest hug. This was lovely.

parcae October 27 2007, 05:29:01 UTC

I already squeed at you on AIM a little bit about this, but -- oh, oh I loved this. Sweet, with little unexpected bits of utter, utter sadness (oh Spencer! oh Brendon!) and then there's hope at the end, and it's lovely.

(Also, Brendon playing the cello is always good.)

disarm_d October 27 2007, 19:33:02 UTC

Oh, I'm really glad! Thank you!

(Also, Brendon playing the cello is always good.)
This is also how I feel. Nrrrrrrrrrrrrrg.

Thanks a bunch, sweetie. <3