Prickly Pear | Ryan/Brendon | NC-17 | ~ 4700 words |

[disarm_d]

Prickly Pear
Brendon/Ryan | NC-17 | ~ 4700 words
Sometimes it's harder to remember where the line is though, when it's just the two of them.

Thank you so much to elfiepike and sociofemme for betaing! ♥♥♥

Comments

[airgiodslv]

Wonderful as always. Their voices are perfect and a joy to read. I love how comfortable they are with each other, even when things are changing.

[disarm_d]

It was weird and new trying to write Ryan's voice, so I'm glad it actually worked. Thank you so much! ♥

[kickingrad]

BRENDON GOES SPLAT. ♥

Ahem.

I love the stoned conversation and that particular brand of logic, and the feeling that they've been approaching and skirting this for years, even if they never crossed the line before, so it's not so much a big deal really. And probably he won't be leaking it to the media, which I could totally hear him say. Also, you know, 69ing.

[disarm_d]

I'm really glad that it worked for you! That's totally awesome to hear.

Thank you so much! :D

[disarm_d]

Thank you!

[jasmasson]

Hee! Adorable and funny. Ryan doesn't really care how dumb he looks when there's only Brendon to see. D'awwwww :)

[disarm_d]

Thanks a lot!

[insunshine]

Oh man, this was so gorgeously lovely. I absolutely adore the language and the imagery you used.

[disarm_d]

I'm so glad that you liked it! Thank you very much.