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dirty_smudge

Business As Usual, Part Four: Family

Jun 19, 2009 12:46

A/N: I intend to write a part 3.5 for what Spock and Uhura got up to during the night, but for now we have pancakes, yoga and the sensual drying of cutlery.
Fandom: Star Trek
Series: Business As Usual (tagged as "whorefic")
Pairing: Spock/Uhura in this chapter as well as a little bit of Chekov/McCoy and mentions of Kirk/McCoy and Pike/McCoy
Rating: PG- ( Read more... )

fandom: star trek, genre: slash, series: whorefic

Comments 33

lisamariedavis June 19 2009, 12:19:42 UTC

I was thrilled to find this update. I love the real sense of family.

dirty_smudge June 19 2009, 22:21:37 UTC

Thanks. I'm a bit "meh" about this chapter, but I'm all about the angst. Glad you liked ^__^

recumbentgoat June 19 2009, 12:43:23 UTC

Spock: Captain Save-a-Ho LOL i keed i keed!!!

I love the relationships you've got going here. fascinating!

dirty_smudge June 19 2009, 22:23:30 UTC

Fascinating indeed. Hopefully the action will pick up next chapter (I'm looking forward to writing Christopher. I have such fondness for Pike in all universes)

Glad you liked ^__^

rip_the_tide June 19 2009, 15:21:36 UTC

I LOVE this AU. I can't wait to see what Pike will do... XD

You know a fic is great when you can't decide whether you want a happy ending or a sad one!!!

dirty_smudge June 19 2009, 22:26:14 UTC

Hey, I'm the writer and I have no idea whether the ending will be a happy one or a sad one. (I'm thinking "bittersweet")

I imagine Pike will say gentlemanly things and be a good dancer. I hope people will like him in this AU.

Glad you liked this chapter ^___^

joirerson June 19 2009, 15:53:50 UTC

This reminds me of Firefly- both of the brothel episode and the whole show. This is good, since I adore Firefly.

Looking forward to the next installment! I want to hear all about Bones' tux and the fancy party.

dirty_smudge June 19 2009, 22:31:41 UTC

I think this is secretly based on the brothel episode from Firefly. It's been at the back of my mind while I've been writing this. And Kirk is, of course, Mal, although I doubt Bones is Inara.

Bones scrubs up nice in a tux. Oh God, yeah, he actually is Inara because Pike is Atherton, except less of a prick, and Kirk is Mal, except he doesn't punch Christopher in the face. Well, he might; I haven't decided exactly how the next chapter's gonna play out...

(I should send Chekov along in a dress no I shouldn't)

calicokat June 19 2009, 18:44:47 UTC

X) Ahhh, this made me warm and squishy.

Leonard never admitted anything unless he was backed against a wall.

It's true!! I giggled when Janice and Christine came down with Gaila. I can't remember if they'd been mentioned before but I was like "Brilliant!" when I saw all three names together. *g* (I could've missed it earlier.)

I love pimp!Nyota. She's affectionate, caring, and completely in control of Spock. Pavel's story about being kidnapped from Russia made me giggle. You talk about not being great with dialogue but the dialogue in this fic was fantastic! Heh heh he...pudgy Leonard on a diet.

dirty_smudge June 19 2009, 22:40:54 UTC

*pokes his flab* - Jim likes his flab.

I never mentioned them before, but there had to be more than one girl working for Uhura, so I chucked in the two that came to mind. Janice is blonde, spirited and takes care of her appearance. Christine is pretty and quiet (but caters to some of the more exotic kinks) and harbours a secret crush on Spock.

I've pretty much decided Pavel's actual back story. There are two ways I could reveal it: write from his point of view or have him tell Leonard (which would have to be at a special moment).

You're warm and squishy? *squish squish* - this is punishment for molesting my brain.