fic: to his own comedy

Jun 24, 2010 12:56

Title: To His Own Comedy
Pairing: 5980/8059
Fandom: Katekyo Hitman Reborn!
Rating: NC-17
Disclaimer: Not mine
Note: Beta by theotherdenise , my hero
Summary: Yamamoto always knew he was an idiot. He just didn’t know of what kind.

for lampazo_libre  who is fucked up in the most beautiful way. Happy birthday <3

therefore never ask for more )

lamppost, !8059, fiction, !5980, @reborn!

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nimuu June 24 2010, 06:59:17 UTC
this was amazing. I forgot how much I enjoyed reading your fics for the first time, because all the bittersweetness just sort of attacks me and - i don't even know, this was brilliant. The repetition and dialogue and the perfectly IC Gokudera. Plus, their conversation in the bed was so domestic and adorable to read.

<333

THIS IS WORTH IT IF I MISS MY BUS.

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dicks June 24 2010, 14:51:22 UTC
Did you miss the bus? Please don't, because I used to take bus to school and when I missed it I had to wait for another 30mins for the next bus to arrive. Hmm why am I talking about busses? OTL||

Anyway THANK YOU SO MUCH. <33

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keleosnoonna June 24 2010, 09:10:53 UTC
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
♥ THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL BB  ♥
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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dicks June 24 2010, 14:51:56 UTC
Thanks so much BB <3

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yamamotokun80 June 24 2010, 09:23:34 UTC
hahaha...
I love it...
it is just too realistic...

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dicks June 24 2010, 14:52:21 UTC
Hahahahh thanks so much! \o/

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lampazo_libre June 24 2010, 09:36:03 UTC
Oh, you.
This is. Ah. Beyond beautiful. No words enough to describe this. I was clenching my hands together all the time while reading this and and and it got me so much. This is the golden, and don’t you dare deny this! You know, this raw feeling, and ahhhh I can’t explain properly as usual, but you are a genius of words as always.
Loved the feeling, and the story, and how everything is so true, and all the little details, you’re the maestro, as usual. DAMN, man, this was wonderful. And it just shifts from one shade to another and everything comes together just so delicately. ILY. Unbelivable thing.
Also OMG, allusions to RL, I almost cried at several certain moments and related so so so much, oh you.
And. The toothbrush cameo. Just. The toothbrush cameo.
Damn you, Dicks, you are so awesome and unbelievably talented too and ahhhhh I’m so glad I met you and this is the most perfect present, ever. THANK YOU. SO MUCH. My heart beats for you, b <3 ( ... )

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pestetada June 24 2010, 10:27:10 UTC
I second this. <3 because I'm too lame~

it's an awesome fic!

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dicks June 24 2010, 15:04:45 UTC
Pfttt no, you're not lame. I know because I live in the lame kingdom. And thanks so much <3

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dicks June 24 2010, 10:44:00 UTC

... )

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hornithorynque June 24 2010, 09:45:03 UTC
Awjgh. I like how everything become clearer in the end ! I read it twice, because I'm always scared of missing something xD There are signs everywhere, and Yamamoto looks for it too, was gorgeous. And what I also like with you, this's the contrast between how it's written, and Gokudera's words, as if even vulgarity becomes poetic <3 And I like the way you give importance to details and... and I just -just- love it. Really.

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dicks June 26 2010, 02:57:51 UTC
kjjhdsjcb I did that all the time, I mean reading some books twice or more because I didn't wanna miss every single details hahahaa. Sometimes words stuck in my head for days. Anyway thanks b for your lovely, lovely review because damn, you're too sweet to be true and I feel so blue (yay it rhymes)

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