Drabble: Fleeting and Tremulous (Gen)

Aug 14, 2006 18:34

Title: Fleeting and Tremulous
Author: cinaed
Rating: PG
Summary: David remembers being happy.
Word Count: 159 ( Read more... )

fiction, rating: g, title: fleeting and tremulous, user: cinaed, pairing: none

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duckgirlie August 14 2006, 23:27:08 UTC
Awb.

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cinaed August 15 2006, 00:28:27 UTC
*pats David*

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cinaed August 15 2006, 00:30:20 UTC
I know, he needs a hug. *pats him* Thanks for reading.

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csi_niteowl August 15 2006, 01:16:40 UTC
I am in awe of your ability to convey so much with so little words.

Just makes me want to hug David.

Niteowl

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cinaed August 15 2006, 02:45:50 UTC
The boy needs a hug, doesn't he? *snuggles David* Thanks for reading.

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not_sally August 15 2006, 05:37:49 UTC
ouchie.

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cinaed August 16 2006, 00:16:37 UTC
*pats David* I really ought to be nicer to him.... Thanks for reading. ^_^

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firebubbles310 August 15 2006, 09:30:32 UTC
cin! you keep torturing david. and i agree with niteowl, totally in awe how well written that was for how short it was. genius!

and awwwness! david had hamsters!!!

*pulls david away from cin* we won't let her hurt you anymore. promise! you can have him back when you are gonna write another happy story (though that might not be possible anytime soon... huh.)

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cinaed August 16 2006, 00:18:16 UTC
It won't be anytime soon. *yanks David back* He will be stuck in angst fics and suck it up, dangit. ^_~ And David had hamsters. And then they "ran away" -- I get the feeling his mother offed 'em. Or fed them to the neighbor's cat. Anyways, glad you enjoyed, Bubbles. ^_~

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firebubbles310 August 16 2006, 02:39:29 UTC
*shrugs* oh well i tried to help him. guess he'll have to learn to deal.

poor david- his hamsters "ran away"

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