♥ "Past Imperfect" for dgficexchange ♥

[fienabler]

Title: Past Imperfect
Rating: PG13
Possible Spoilers/Warnings: If you’ve read the books, you’re good.
Author's Notes: This isn’t at all the fic I set out to write, but, oddly enough, I like it better that way. Thanks a million to my lovely betas. I couldn’t have done this without you. ♥
Summary: It should have worked out. Sometimes I

Comments

[idreamofdraco]

That was really sweet. :) For a fic full of dialogue, I think you handled it really well. It did what you intended, told a story. I hardly even realized I was reading dialogue most of the time. Great job and thanks for sharing!

[idreamofdraco]

Thank you! That's really a compliment. :)

[frust_sheep]

Cute and very believable. Great work! :)

[frust_sheep]

*blushes* Thank you!

[whifflebird]

Great job!
I loved hearing about why it didn't work out with Harry and Astoria. I love it when the epilogue of doom gets negated by having Draco and Ginny be together after that point in time. It was really interesting to see their conversation together after they've both been married and had kids with other people, and you did a really awesome job with their conversation. It was perfectly reflective of their ages and the seriousness of what they had gone through, but not overly heavy.
I loved it! :)

[whifflebird]

Thank you! I was very excited to explore the reasons why Draco and Ginny's respective relationships with their spouses didn't work out. I'm glad it came across as real and believable. :)

[anonymous]

*big grin* Thanks.

[jessicakmalfoy]

this just made me go "AWWWWWW" all over. i love it when stories incorporate the epilogue in a way that's favorable for d/g, even though as d/g fans we all hate that ep! lol

thanks for sharing this sweet, insightful story!

[lielabell]

Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.