♥ "Past Imperfect" for dgficexchange ♥

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Title: Past Imperfect
Rating: PG13
Possible Spoilers/Warnings: If you’ve read the books, you’re good.
Author's Notes: This isn’t at all the fic I set out to write, but, oddly enough, I like it better that way. Thanks a million to my lovely betas. I couldn’t have done this without you. ♥
Summary: It should have worked out. Sometimes I

Comments

[phantomangel]

I am an absolute suck for "fill-in-the-blanks" fics and I absolutely ADORED this one. I loved the fact that it was ALL dialogue. I think you handled the storytelling perfectly.

Very nicely done Mystery Author!!!

[lielabell]

:D I didn't even plan for it to be so heavy on the dialog. It just sort of happened. And I am glad to know that it worked as well as I hoped it would.

[goeungurl]

Awwww. I love that you made it all into one conversation and you explained away the epilogue of doom. In particular, I really liked how you handled Ginny and Harry's divorce--making it the children's idea, quick and amicable, and ending as friends. That's always how I pictured it. Thank you, mystery author!

[lielabell]

Well, I don't really see Harry as the sort of person who could harbor a great deal of hate. Not after all that he went through. So it totally made sense to me that he would be the sort to stay friends with his ex. I'm glad it came off as believable. :)

[seegrim]

Very good! I liked the way you told this story. Draco and Ginny are mature, but by no way old or stuffy. Thank you!

[lielabell]

Thank you! :D

[anonymous]

I loved it. I particularly loved how the kids arranged Harry and Ginny's divorce. That was really funny. lol And it's pretty believible too. Very cool

[lielabell]

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.