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dexstarr

Ficlet: Of Pixies and Wrackspurts

Nov 03, 2010 21:40

Title: Of Pixies and Wrackspurts
Author: dexstarr
Word Count: 200 x 3
Rating: PG-13
Challenge: femslash100 Challenge #257: Before
Characters: Bellatrix Lestrange, Luna Lovegood
Warnings: Hint of femslash
Author's Note: This was incredibly difficult to write. illusionrain originally gave me the pairing Bellatrix/Luna, and 'fairy lights,' and then I worked another prompt in here. ( Read more... )

pairing: bellatrix/luna, community: femslash100, length: ficlet (501-1000), character: luna lovegood, year: 2010, warning: femmeslash, fic, rating: pg-13, character: bellatrix (black) lestrange

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dexstarr November 4 2010, 02:00:29 UTC

Thanks, bb. I'm not totally pleased with it, but after two days of fucking with it I wanted to get it done, heh. Glad you liked!

leigh_adams November 4 2010, 01:52:48 UTC

Oooh, good job, dear! I actually wrote Bellatrix for the first time last week... didn't do a good job with her, but *shrugs*.

*applauds*

dexstarr November 4 2010, 02:02:33 UTC

Aww, thanks! I like to think I can write Bellatrix pretty well, but man, Luna is a challenge. What did you write Bella for? I don't see it at your fic comm.

leigh_adams November 4 2010, 02:10:30 UTC

Oh, I wrote her as a supporting character in my last entry for dg_ldws. It should be the most current entry... called "Scream."

dexstarr November 4 2010, 02:20:26 UTC

Holy moly. That was creepy, and I'd say you wrote her freaking fantastically.

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reg_flint November 4 2010, 01:56:11 UTC

You managed to get the two together with finesse, really magnificent. I haven't read a better Belluna Lovestrange.

dexstarr November 4 2010, 02:05:02 UTC

Thanks Kat! That means a lot, coming from you.

deirdre_aithne November 4 2010, 02:26:58 UTC

o_o

...*flails excitedly* Oh my goodness!!! That is just...so very tasty! :-D It's so very teasing in a way, and it gives Bella an almost softer side. I love it so much!!

dexstarr November 4 2010, 02:32:39 UTC

*grin*

Thanks! This was so hard, you heard me whine about it a bit for the past day or two, so I'm glad you like it. Writing Luna...omg I'm so not doing it again any time soon! And I do like exploring Bella's softer side :D

illusionrain November 4 2010, 02:31:41 UTC

You. I TOLD YOU THIS WOULD BE BRILLIANT!

I loved that Luna was the one who initiated the kiss. And the descriptions of Bellatrix before Azkaban were a very clever, very nice touch. That last line was great as well - to be honest, everything was great about this!

My favourite line is, undoubtedly -
“I can see pixies in your eyes,” Luna said dreamily. Bella's reaction was priceless. But you know how much I love when you write the Black sisters ;)

dexstarr November 4 2010, 02:36:34 UTC

YAY!

This was so freaking difficult, so I'm quite happy people are liking it.

So I thought it would be somewhat IC for Luna to initiate the kiss, because 1) of the healing comment, and 2) I think she'd see it as a way to keep herself safe. Or maybe I'm thinking way too much into this.

And I'm glad you liked that line, since it's how I used the prompt you gave me!