Drabble: Don't Move

[dexstarr]

Title: Don't Move
Author: dexstarr
Word Count: 499
Rating: NC-17
Challenge: hp_humpdrabbles "Teeth" by Lady Gaga.
Characters: Bellatrix Lestrange, Barty Crouch Jr.
Warnings: Oral Sex
Author's Note: First time writing this pairing.
Disclaimer: HP and all assorted belong to JKR, and are not mine.

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Comments

[dexstarr]

I hadn't listened to it before the challenge, but it grew on me. I think my favorite of hers is...Bad Romance maybe. I don't know for sure.

This pairing is definitely growing on me, lets me get my femdom out, rawr!

And thanks, happy you liked hon :)

[dexstarr]

Actually I think Barty would tend toward submissive. I don't think he's that dominant, but that's just my opinion. I mean he's young, impressionable...

Maybe not though. It could be a challenge to write that fight for dominance between them, hrmmmmmm.

[reg_flint]

I don't like most smut, but I do like well written smut with a bit (no pun intended) of kink. Good work.

[dexstarr]

Thanks! :)

Here's the weirdest thing, considering I've been writing a ton of smut lately (and have more in the pipeline) - I consider it more of a challenge than writing gen fic, because I don't necessarily care for sex much. But I like kink a lot, and kink's usually associated with sex. TMI maybe, but I find it somewhat ironic for myself.

I need to figure out somewhat to write kink and control dynamics that isn't smutty...hmm.

[opaljade]

Great take on the prompt. This was perfect! I adored Bellatrix's portrayal--intense, sensual, a tad insane but sharp as a whip at the same time!

Your writing is unforced and flows nicely. This exchange between them really made me LOL! : She could read his mind? What sort of skills did this witch have?

“Plenty, and I’m sure you’ve never heard of most of them.” She punctuated each word with a swirl of her tongue on him, and Barty groaned from the airy sensations.

Very well done, dexstarr! :D

(I'm going to have to find darker icons for your page! LOL!)

[dexstarr]

Thank you muchly, OJ!

I freaking love writing Bellatrix, in case you can't tell, hehe. Mainly for all the reasons you mentioned, and it's just so damn fun. I think I have an inner Bella :D

LOL at darker icons. My current default is a nice, bright green!

[dexstarr]

Naturally biting was the first thing I thought of with "teeth." I'm mean!

Thanks, glad you thought it was hot. :D

[thaneofcawdor]

I'd say something coherent but I just can't do it right now.

You write this pairing impeccably. He's so green and she's such a dangerous bitch. I want an obedient Barty in my life right now because if he's anything like yours, he's divine.

[dexstarr]

Oh thank you! I was curious to see what you would have to say about it, considering I love how you write the two! Glad to see I have rendered you incoherent.

And my Barty is kinda green, I think he needs more training! But I'm sure you're more than up for it.

[thaneofcawdor]

Oh wow, really? That's so sweet. Well, I definitely love your version of this most delicious of pairings.

Oh yes, I'll, ahem, take charge of dear Mr Crouch. *shifty eyes* I also Friended you because your fics are wonderful and make me ecstatic. If it's not all right just poke me with a small dagger or something.

[dexstarr]

Thanks! I plan to write them more, I really had fun with this. I kind if want to see what would happen if Barty tried to get control over Bellatrix...

Have fun with Barty and just send him back when you've knocked some more sense and obedience into him!

I shall add you as a friend when I get home, on my phone now and lj mobile isnt the greatest. And thanks for adding me :) hopefully I can keep up to the level of incohereny I have so far!