#16. all the steps up to your door;
: all the steps up to your door
: yunho-centric; yunho/changmin, ot5 | pg
: they pour their hearts into their letters; he returns them with a smile
: for kpop-ficmix, originally posted here. remix of nobetterpicture's fic.
( they’d sit, pressed thigh-to-thigh on the subways )
: yunho-centric; yunho/changmin, ot5 | pg
: they pour their hearts into their letters; he returns them with a smile
: for kpop-ficmix, originally posted here. remix of nobetterpicture's fic.
( they’d sit, pressed thigh-to-thigh on the subways )
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BRB READING OMG OMG
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and hi ♥ ilu
brb with comment, give me a second ;~; /clings
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/HOLDS YOUR HAND AS WE CRY TOGETHER.
♥ ilu moar :")
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I freaking love the original fic already, so this is like......... idk how I could compare this ;~; like like THE BEST ABSOLUTELY BEST THING EVER AND FIC WISE AND MAKES ME SO DAMN HAPPY
okay before I forget it later: I like how you kept the original style somehow. Already with the beginning Yunho prefers to think of himself as a strong man, if anything.
I think it's really difficult to remix other's fics, but you did such a great excellent perfect job, idek ;~;
WHY ARE YOU SO PERFECT?
... I will just warn you beforehand: I might quote A LOT bc SO MANY sentences were amazing and touching and the little details and so many and idk, so you will get a lot quotes, sorry? ;;
Months of inactivity as a group collects, and there seems to be a world between each of them, even when they stand with their elbows knocking and thighs pressing. I have a soft spot for the little details, you know this and that's one of the reasons why I love your fics so much but what I wanted to say is that I have a soft spot for interactions like ' ( ... )
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The words You don’t have to be strong all alone, Hyung glares at him in carefully placed characters.
I love that your words can 'glare' <3 and still the 'carefully placed characters'. shjdhfg details!
And he can see Yoochun, pressed into a corner of his room, maybe struggling from a bout of insomnia, with a notebook pressed against the curve of his knee and pencil poised in hand.
yoochun ;~; ♥
what got me here was the 'pressed into a corner of his room'. I can't even really explain why...
Them in this foreign land, sneaking out late to find some semblance of home crammed into a nook or cranny of the city around them. They’d sit, pressed thigh-to-thigh on the subways, Korean-to-Japanese dictionaries forgotten in their jacket pockets as they would explore the area and stay out past curfew because the taxicabs were far too expensive for them and their empty wallets.first: I didn't know the word nook or cranny (esl hello), but this showed me this is HQ writing, idk.. haha ( ... )
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Yunho knows Changmin. He knows that more than anything, right now, Changmin needs him even if he won’t admit it.
your formatting is so great too! (lol somehow I'm at a loss for words, bc it sounds kinda stupid when I always write 'perfect' although I think it is haha)
And Yunho knows all the steps to his door by heart, tries to think of the right things to say to provide some encouragement when everything seems to be going wrong.
the 'steps to his door' ♥
he always takes care and thinks about to encourage the others~ ♥
He holds him, strong like he knows he should be,
waylt Yunho ;; /pokes him
sdklfh I don't know what to say anymore to your writing, you already know everything, right? ♥
And if he thinks about it long enough, imagining the words on the papers into existence, it’s just like the other three are here in this spacious hallway with them. Suddenly everything seems like it will work out.
;~; I like this, a lot. esp since it connects to the beginning ♥
The next day he writes a piece of his heart into replies ( ... )
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school's being a bitch, as it usually always is, so there's not much time for me to write. and i almost forgot about ficmix, then, lo and behold, i get a message requesting me to pinch hit. the original fic is much better :'D it was done right the first time ♥
IT HAS BEEN TOO LONG AND I WAS GOING TO STOP BY YOUR POST TO REQUEST SOMETHING BUT I REALLY HAVEN'T LOGGED ON TO LIVEJOURNAL IN, LIKE, FOREVER!!!!!3122623149!@#@!~~~!!!! :((((((
spam away. i embrace everything you send me. honestly. like right now, i'm speechless. and i have this gigantic and stupid smile on my face.
oh, how you do make my heart beat~! :3
also. i miss fandom. i wish they'd at least do a variety show or something together. i miss jaemin beating each other up :"(
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thanks again! ♥
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♥♥♥♥♥
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you're wonderful ♥ now write more fic D< lol
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