: all the steps up to your door
: yunho-centric; yunho/changmin, ot5 | pg
: they pour their hearts into their letters; he returns them with a smile
: for
kpop-ficmix, originally posted
here. remix of
nobetterpicture's
fic.
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they’d sit, pressed thigh-to-thigh on the subways )
Yunho knows Changmin. He knows that more than anything, right now, Changmin needs him even if he won’t admit it.
your formatting is so great too! (lol somehow I'm at a loss for words, bc it sounds kinda stupid when I always write 'perfect' although I think it is haha)
And Yunho knows all the steps to his door by heart, tries to think of the right things to say to provide some encouragement when everything seems to be going wrong.
the 'steps to his door' ♥
he always takes care and thinks about to encourage the others~ ♥
He holds him, strong like he knows he should be,
waylt Yunho ;; /pokes him
sdklfh I don't know what to say anymore to your writing, you already know everything, right? ♥
And if he thinks about it long enough, imagining the words on the papers into existence, it’s just like the other three are here in this spacious hallway with them. Suddenly everything seems like it will work out.
;~; I like this, a lot. esp since it connects to the beginning ♥
The next day he writes a piece of his heart into replies to their messages. He smiles. Maybe, just maybe, a few weeks, days, or hours later, he’ll work up the strength to call them.
♥ formatting, wording, details, everything ♥
He won’t cry, though, because he’s strong. But if they ask him to, if they tell him it’s okay, he can tear down his walls and let them be his strength for a while.
(yes, I had to split the last part up into two parts to quote)
skfhdskjf you are strong, yunho ;~;
and and the last sentence is so much love and says so much about their relationship and this whole... dbsk thing and and I LOVE IT. i love the ending okay! ♥
this fic makes me so so sad but at the same time happy because it holds hope and promises and I love center!fics and you did it so beautifully, the remixing and your wording. and I have the feeling like your writing just got better again, but idk because IT HAS BEEN SO LONG SINCE I READ SMTH NEW FROM YOU (jsyk)
but that's okay (okay it's not but I have to respect your decision and all that stuff so I will and all but still...) because I will be waiting here and then... you see, be like that when a fic finally comes out again ♥
and sorry for my HUGE FONT comment spam and spazzes ;~;
I was just so excited, especially after I read it and and all.. /blush
but I was first this time \o/
ilu, darling
how are you? how's life for you? I hope not too busy. try to keep your smile and be happy.
I miss you, lots and lots ♥
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school's being a bitch, as it usually always is, so there's not much time for me to write. and i almost forgot about ficmix, then, lo and behold, i get a message requesting me to pinch hit. the original fic is much better :'D it was done right the first time ♥
IT HAS BEEN TOO LONG AND I WAS GOING TO STOP BY YOUR POST TO REQUEST SOMETHING BUT I REALLY HAVEN'T LOGGED ON TO LIVEJOURNAL IN, LIKE, FOREVER!!!!!3122623149!@#@!~~~!!!! :((((((
spam away. i embrace everything you send me. honestly. like right now, i'm speechless. and i have this gigantic and stupid smile on my face.
oh, how you do make my heart beat~! :3
also. i miss fandom. i wish they'd at least do a variety show or something together. i miss jaemin beating each other up :"(
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it's okay, I know :| my college will start in two weeks and I guess I will barely have time for ANYTHING besides learning studying learning japanese and stuff.
aw, even a pinch hitting ♥ so amazing~~~~~. I don't want to compare both fics because I love them both BUT I just freaking love your writing style and writing and all that so this is my favourite ♥
OMG WHAT WHAT REQUEST? my writing is not even worth it being for you ;~~~; /flails
but but I would feel so honored if you actually wanted to request something from me
:DDDD makes me happy to hear! as long as my spams and spazzes and comments make you smile and happy, then I'm happy too and won't stop haha.
♥ ♥ ♥
;~; yeah I can only agree. I miss it so much. everything and and everything D:
and..
i miss you so much ♥
(just bc I like huge font and I really really miss you lots and lots ;;)
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