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[Pin] "Banish My Hunger"

Apr 28, 2007 22:33

Title: Banish My Hunger
Author: 4-03-am @ devetir
Pairing: Yamapi/Jin
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Jin is hungry.
Notes: Written for saturnrings18s cuz she comes up with weird, cheesy lines, and she's my bff. ♥ Thanks to x_caesura for the beta, and for putting up with my daily torture. ♥

( “You really thought I was going to kiss you, didn’t you?” Jin smirks and arches an eyebrow. “Admit it, Pi, you wanted it.” )

Comments 47

spurious April 29 2007, 03:24:31 UTC

sdiofkjaldsf;laskdfj OH JIN. LINES. ILU.

This was...oh man. Ridiculously hot. I love that it starts out as a game but then they are just OVERWHELMED BY THEIR OWN HOTNESS and ;lskjdf nngh. The bit with Jin's tongue and Pi's earlobe killed me oh god. I have such a weakness for earkissing. Nnngh. *_* THIS WAS SO GREAT.

devetir April 29 2007, 03:29:04 UTC

Ahahah. Hot? That is reassuring, really. I was kind of going ARRRGH and JHSDKJHD on the train the other day writing the earkissing and the elderly gentleman sitting across from me was giving me strange looks. ~_~;; I'm really glad you enjoyed it. ♥

spurious April 29 2007, 03:33:00 UTC

a;sldfjk enjoyed it. Yes. oh god. It's so awkwardly amusing to write porny things with other people watching, hehehe. I was writing Pin!ninja!porn the other day during Shakespeare class, and the boy next to me kept stealing looks at my notebook...

tinyangl April 29 2007, 03:36:00 UTC

DAJSFPOICVUHERJ. We know what I think about this. @.@ I just.. it.. KILLS. I love it so much. @.@ Yamapi finally taking a step because he thinks it'll take forever if he let Jin do all the moves. And GUH to the make out scene and OMG, IT'S JUST HOT. @.@ I love it. Love.Love.LOVE IT. *dances away*

devetir April 29 2007, 04:08:07 UTC

SKJDAKL. You don't know how awesome you were. Part of the reason this even got posted is cuz you kept encouraging me to do so when I was chickening out. I am so glad you liked it. ♥

saturnrings18s April 29 2007, 04:02:13 UTC

“Or you could quench my thirst and banish my hunger. After all, I’m already drinking you in with my eyes,”
LMFAO I can't believe you used my stupid line... WTF was I thinking when I wrote that???? Oh God!!!! Psychotic laughter has commenced. Admit it, I am your muse ;) And calculus is mine. XD

devetir April 29 2007, 04:04:14 UTC

XDDD. I admit to nothing until I've had a proper confession from you.

saturnrings18s April 29 2007, 04:10:41 UTC

A confession you say? Not until tomorrow under the cherry blossoms where you'll banish my hunger. We'll watch the sunset as the swaying winds caress us in a flurry of....[oh i give up...i still cant believe you posted before me and I wrote mine before you ::facepalm::

devetir April 29 2007, 04:14:09 UTC

OH GOD. You are like a cheese producing machine. Or whatever they're called, I dunno. And, SAKURA FEST, OMG. Tomorrow! CANNOT WAIT. 8D

[Only because yours was LATE!]

ravenn_rose April 29 2007, 04:21:26 UTC

Bwahahaha, this made me laugh a lot lol ^^

I loved it...the kiss was absolutely delicious mmmmm ^~^

devetir April 29 2007, 04:23:58 UTC

Ahaha, I'm glad it did. :D

I was kind of iffy writing the kiss scene, cuz I really had no idea what I was doing, but seems like it turned out okay in the end. :D

ravenn_rose April 29 2007, 04:37:29 UTC

No it was really good...usually people talk about the tongues when they write a kissing scene...but nobody's preoccupied with what their tongues are doing when they kiss someone..it's all about what the heck your hands are doing...and that's usually hotter than tongues anyway....

...and now that I've awkwardly ranted about tongues I'm off lol...but seriously, no, I hearted this fic ^______^

devetir April 29 2007, 12:21:52 UTC

Hahaha, I didn't even realize that actually. Thanks for the feedback. I'll keep this in mind for future ficcing. :D

anonymous April 29 2007, 05:17:27 UTC

Lol... they just suddenly 'giggled like school girls' heehee that's the cutest <3