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[Pin] "Banish My Hunger"

Apr 28, 2007 22:33

Title: Banish My Hunger
Author: 4-03-am @ devetir
Pairing: Yamapi/Jin
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Jin is hungry.
Notes: Written for saturnrings18s cuz she comes up with weird, cheesy lines, and she's my bff. ♥ Thanks to x_caesura for the beta, and for putting up with my daily torture. ♥

( “You really thought I was going to kiss you, didn’t you?” Jin smirks and arches an eyebrow. “Admit it, Pi, you wanted it.” )

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anamuan April 29 2007, 05:37:48 UTC

After all, I’m already drinking you in with my eyes,”
OMG that's the corniest line ever! I like, died.

Oh, to be a neighbor innocently leaving the house then...

devetir April 29 2007, 05:44:18 UTC

skdjaslk. saturnrings18s has some odd fascination with that sort of thing. We were talking about Jin's "you make me feel like a tiger" and then somehow, this fic was born. I don't even know how. -_-

OH GOD, I don't even have to be leaving the apartment; it would suffice for me to be indoors and glued to the wall, just listening in. As long as it's those two. *___*

matchynishi April 29 2007, 06:02:48 UTC

Ahahaa.

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devetir April 29 2007, 06:07:09 UTC

:O No way! You read this? Hahha, genuinely surprised.

If he had said it to Kame, what would Kame's reaction be? Smack Jin in the head? Dress up as Sailor Moon for him? Buy him ramen?

matchynishi April 29 2007, 06:24:45 UTC

It was after a long and intense debate with myself. :p But I wanted to read your first JE fic!

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eternalotome9 April 29 2007, 06:46:21 UTC

Ooooh I love it. There should be a chain fic - the same situation rewritten with each ship. I'm totally serious here. Anyone in?
*is probably going to regret this*

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phonestrap April 29 2007, 06:27:43 UTC

Hahahahaa, you actually posted it! XDD

devetir April 29 2007, 12:08:06 UTC

Ahah, err, yeah. I figured I might as well? I took a lot of your suggestions into consideration. Thanks for helping me out. :3

eternalotome9 April 29 2007, 06:44:16 UTC

kljofiajf soooo HOT!! Pin's not my ship, really, but it doesn't matter, they're too hot together not to like here!

rolling his hips, slow and indulgent
I love this - the slowness somehow multiplies the level of djfaofon and I love how Jin is so turned on he CAN'T CONTROL HIMSELF JDSFKJFdfoijfaosjf. I'm giggling madly XDDD

devetir April 29 2007, 12:06:20 UTC

Lol, I'll take a risk and ask: what is your ship? Cuz what can possibly be hotter than Yamapi + Jin? XD

Hahah, Jin's been wanting to do that for a long time, but didn't have the guts to. Going to America and watching weird movies with cheesy lines gave him the courage to finally jump his best friend's bones. And it's not as if Yamapi was disinclined. :D

eternalotome9 April 29 2007, 16:20:20 UTC

Usually Akame, but I've been in a Pin mood lately :D They're just so cool together!

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devetir April 29 2007, 12:02:03 UTC

Yay! There will never be enough Pin!

Hahaha, it's as you said: they're dumb. Also, they make their dumb HOT. I can't quite say the same about Kame! *bricked*