and the control you've got is spinning round and round his finger

[detourtoyou]

Title: and the control you’ve got is spinning round and round his finger
Author: detourtoyou
Rating: R
Pairing: Frank/Gerard, onesided, forced Frank/Mikey
POV: 3rd
Summary: Mikey’s used to the days of living with just Gerard, but now that it’s Gerard, Mikey, and Frank, it seems too crowded everywhere. He wants to get along with Frank, if only for Gerard’s

Comments

[enimsaj_2]

trying to think of something to say... um... i really really really really like this. i might even love it. but... i can't love it because i'm too disappointed by the sad fact that there isn't more.
I don't really have any ConCrit, because i have no complaints. Other than this wonderful piece of awesome and sadness not being long enough.
also, if you hadn't said at the beginning that it was your first "official" MCR fic, i would be scouring your journal for more. You're a seriously good writer, dude.

[detourtoyou]

Thank you so much!! ♥

I'm glad you liked it, and I'm sorry it's not longer hahah. It actually turned out a lot longer than I originally planned, but I'm glad it wasn't a complete fail :)

[kopperblaze]

oh wow this was intense oO i wouldn't have expected this to happen at all in the beginning.

amazingly written, i enjoyed it! though awwww moikay D:

[detourtoyou]

Aww, thank you ♥♥ Hearing this from you makes me infinitely happy and relieved that it's not total fail/crap. :)

Mikey is still loved though! He'll pull through D:

[detourtoyou]

Thank you so much! <3 I always love it when people comment on my writing style; it makes me happy :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[s0ckpupp3t]

Oh, damn, this is fantastic.

And, I must confess, well-timed. I was reading fandomsecrets yesterday, and this came up, and first I kinda giggled, and then I realized later I was thinking about it, and then today I read this fic

[detourtoyou]

Not sure why this was screened. Stupid lj D:So um. Wow. I'm not even sure how to respond to this because it's just so amazing and you left me completely speechless and flailing with happy and just. Wow. Thank you. There are so many nice things you said, that I'm just melting with more happy and relief because it wasn't total fail! Also, that pic LOL It matches so well hahah

[s0ckpupp3t]

Squee! You're welcome! I rarely leave crunchy comments, so I was actually a little nervous saying all that. XD

And, oh, duh, context! I didn't find anything confusing on the other two bits, what I meant to say was "And these two bits are like MY FAVORITE OMG"

(And if you ever get bored and wanna try a sequel and are afraid you've screwed it up, seriously, message me, I will beta it like I'm on fire.)

[detourtoyou]

I'm really glad that you did though! It made me just seriously smile all night, so thank you again! <3

Ohh hahah! That was one of my favorite parts to write too so glad you liked :)

Ahhh really? Oh geez, you're just tempting me now hahah. Thanks though! I might take you up on that offer :D ...Although I have a ton of wips I should be working on lol

[madewithstars]

Is this the one I'm supposed to read? O___O

[detourtoyou]

LOL Dude. So fail. You like spammed all of my entries too looking for it even though I gave you the link through skype! XD Hahah, don't worry about it anymore though, I've got it XD

[madewithstars]

OMG. JUST TELL ME. XDD I feel bad for not reading it. XDD

[detourtoyou]

No, go away :P But really, it's okay hahah. I've already got it all covered and stuff so don't worry about it.