and the control you've got is spinning round and round his finger

[detourtoyou]

Title: and the control you’ve got is spinning round and round his finger
Author: detourtoyou
Rating: R
Pairing: Frank/Gerard, onesided, forced Frank/Mikey
POV: 3rd
Summary: Mikey’s used to the days of living with just Gerard, but now that it’s Gerard, Mikey, and Frank, it seems too crowded everywhere. He wants to get along with Frank, if only for Gerard’s

Comments

[detourtoyou]

Not sure why this was screened. Stupid lj D:<

So um. Wow. I'm not even sure how to respond to this because it's just so amazing and you left me completely speechless and flailing with happy and just. Wow. Thank you. There are so many nice things you said, that I'm just melting with more happy and relief because it wasn't total fail! Also, that pic LOL It matches so well hahah!

Oh! Sorry, I totally forgot to reword that line from an earlier draft. Fail on my part. But "they" is referring to Mikey's words/question to Frank when he asked/assumed Frank didn't like Gerard. I'll go fix that haha, thank you for catching it!

Also, I'm not quite sure what you found confusing on the other two bits? /o\

I don't think I'll write any more because I'm afraid I might just end up screwing it up (even the sex! D:) so for now, it'll probably be as is. But seriously, just thank you so much. I feel a bit better about this fic after reading this, and I'm happy Mikey's POV isn't too skewed or off the target. This is literally the best comment I've ever gotten, and I loved hearing what you thought and liked, so thank you! ♥

[s0ckpupp3t]

Squee! You're welcome! I rarely leave crunchy comments, so I was actually a little nervous saying all that. XD

And, oh, duh, context! I didn't find anything confusing on the other two bits, what I meant to say was "And these two bits are like MY FAVORITE OMG"

(And if you ever get bored and wanna try a sequel and are afraid you've screwed it up, seriously, message me, I will beta it like I'm on fire.)

[detourtoyou]

I'm really glad that you did though! It made me just seriously smile all night, so thank you again! <3

Ohh hahah! That was one of my favorite parts to write too so glad you liked :)

Ahhh really? Oh geez, you're just tempting me now hahah. Thanks though! I might take you up on that offer :D ...Although I have a ton of wips I should be working on lol

[s0ckpupp3t]

Anytime, seriously. I'm not much of a writer for anything besides porn, but I adore editing, and the way you wrote this one, hell. I'm tempted to explore some other fandoms you write in just so I can read more of/grok the little bits of poetry and imagery like you have in this one: "It’s the worst lie anyone’s ever kept and the worst secret anyone’s ever told" and "the red right there bleeding between his fingers and letters" - I mean, guh.

[detourtoyou]

You're making me smile again hahah <3 I actually think so far out of everything I've written and posted, this is my favorite. So, this makes me insanely happy that you caught all the little things that are my favorite. I'm trying to write more MCR, but I get really self-conscious about it lolol. Also, porn is awesome, and I totally envy you! I'm the worst at porn /o\