Comments | dessert_first: Fic: The Personal Touch, NC-17, Dean/Castiel

dessert_first

Fic: The Personal Touch, NC-17, Dean/Castiel

Jun 26, 2011 20:59

An AU that takes place during Season Four. Thanks to sisterofdream and ifreet for support and sharp suggestions!

The Personal TouchDean works hard, okay? He's on the road a lot-or, well, always. He spends most of his time either hunting down leads or deliberately putting himself in physical danger. The nearest thing he has to friends are a cantankerous old scrap ( Read more... )

fic: spn, dean/castiel, fic

Comments 54

laura_trekkie August 17 2011, 01:09:17 UTC

I like this first meeting much better than the one where they summoned Cas and then tried to kill him *vbg*. Hot and sweet. I loved the awkwardness and the trust Dean felt for what he thought was a hooker.

Laura.

dessert_first August 22 2011, 23:33:43 UTC

Thanks! I'm happy to hear you liked the story. Awkwardness and trust--well put! I'm glad that worked for you. :)

oywidapoodles October 10 2011, 12:05:54 UTC

He picks out one of Sam's stash of fake credit cards, made out to Mister Dean Forrester

SPUTTERCOUGHLOL Should not have been drinking while reading that.

This was awesome. Awesome! :D

dessert_first October 14 2011, 10:56:25 UTC

Hee! The dangers of drinking while reading fanfic. There should be a PSA about that.

Glad you liked the story!!

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dessert_first July 13 2012, 00:00:30 UTC

Thanks, I'm really glad you liked it! I really loved Castiel in S4, and it seemed he brought this judgement-less, very alien perspective that I missed later on in the series. So I'm especially happy to hear the idea of their meeting playing out this way worked for you :)

cottoncory October 15 2012, 04:05:59 UTC

Wow, that was really awkward in a fun way. I don't seem to read that much fic set in the beginning of S4, but this is really good. I love misunderstanding-type plots and the way you worded the dialogue to be believably ambiguous. Poor Dean, the guilt trip he's gonna go on when he finds out Cas isn't really a hooker. xD

dessert_first October 24 2012, 01:30:41 UTC

Hee, "awkward in a fun way" pretty much says it all, I guess. :)

I'm really glad you liked the story, thanks for letting me know. It was fun coming up with interactions that were ambiguous enough. Oh, boys.

layne67 September 4 2013, 04:41:15 UTC

That was awesome :)

dessert_first September 4 2013, 12:10:22 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for letting me know. :)