You've Been Playing At A Game

[desire_of_nymph]

This may be the strangest thing I've ever written... in a style I've never really tried. Under the cut is my entry for the third round of brigits_flame. This week the theme was "Happiness Is..." Y'all know that input of any sort is appreciated always.

Comments

[archon_mentha]

I really enjoyed this!

[_lippie_]

So good! I like how her bitterness is suddenly contrasted by the ending. :]

[hathorx]

Oooh, I liked the sarcasm and the different characters. Really well written :)

[maihgread]

It was quite good, Katie. One of the things I enjoyed in particular is "I pop off some smart remark" bit. You let us know what happened without having to actually create something perfectly sarcastic for the moment. So many people would ruin that moment by filling in the blank, rather than letting the reader's mind do it for them.

[aisling87]

Oh... delicious. And now I want strawberries...