Comments | desire_of_nymph: As My Colors Fade Out

desire_of_nymph

As My Colors Fade Out

Jul 08, 2008 00:06

My second entry for brigits_flame. My last entry did better than I thought it was going to (second place, what?!), so here's to hoping that this one does just as well :) The theme for this entry was 'It hurts when I do this'. I took a dream of mine and gave it several twists, making it more interesting and more... story-like. Again, I welcome all of your ( Read more... )

writing: twisted muse, family, brigits flame, justice

Comments 11

raynala July 8 2008, 04:13:21 UTC

If you're okay enough to be posting on LJ, I think you're okay overall. /doctor ray. Make the tummyache go away soon!

desire_of_nymph July 8 2008, 04:17:22 UTC

In general I'm a badly-behaved sick person who does things like play in the rain when she should be in bed >.>; But I'll be okay overall, it's running it's course and I'll take it easy again tomorrow so that I'm ready to go back to my normal physical activities come Wednesday ^-^

raynala July 8 2008, 04:20:20 UTC

I always just get super nervous when my friends say they have food poisoning, because my Mom got "food poisoning" a few years ago and it turned out she had appendicitis and almost died in the waiting room of the hospital when she finally got there. So... yeah. I'm paranoid!

desire_of_nymph July 8 2008, 06:03:51 UTC

Wow that would be a good reason to worry :S One of the main reasons why we're so sure it's food poisoning though, is because me and my mom both got it at the same time. So it figures that it's something like that and not so serious as appendicitis. Your paranoia equals totally understandable.

hathorx July 10 2008, 19:49:33 UTC

I really enjoyed reading your entry, it was original and well written. Good luck!

musicrocks987 July 11 2008, 01:28:04 UTC

Good piece.
Enjoyed reading it!
Original!
Nicely done!

Good Luck!

OoO~Stuck in the Stars~OoO

Editing suggestions desert_rose July 12 2008, 08:15:37 UTC

Hi there ( ... )

Re: Editing suggestions desire_of_nymph July 12 2008, 15:09:55 UTC

The ~Fin indicates that the piece is finished, and the bits below are just about my day for the friends I have on here who get curious about that sort of thing.

But thank you very much for the edit - it is all quite useful and I'll remember your pieces of advice for my next work. ^-^

Re: Editing suggestions desert_rose July 12 2008, 21:51:40 UTC

You're very welcome!
Lots of luck this week, and I look forward to reading more from you!

intermezzo_poet July 12 2008, 17:19:58 UTC

Nice detail in this piece. A bit confusing at times, but it made a lot more sense towards the end. Nice work. :)