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Jul 11, 2011 11:17

Title: Worst Ever
Author: desfinado
Pairing: Mikey/Pete
Rating: R
Word count: 633
Disclaimer: They don't belong to me; not making a profit.
Summary: Pete's forgotten to keep kissing him again.
Notes: Written for the bandom kissing meme prompt "Pete/Mikey, during sex" ( here)

( Worst Ever )

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Comments 12

harborshore July 11 2011, 20:37:55 UTC

THEM. FOREVER.

desfinado July 15 2011, 21:42:33 UTC

:D Glad you enjoyed! ♥

pearl_o July 11 2011, 23:26:42 UTC

<3333333333

desfinado July 15 2011, 21:42:47 UTC

RIGHT? UGH. BOYS. <333333333333

jukeboxromeo July 12 2011, 10:50:14 UTC

OMG boys. I love all faily sex, especially when Pete is involved. Also, height difference! ♥!

desfinado July 15 2011, 21:43:40 UTC

Faily sex is kind of my favourite! So glad you enjoyed, and thanks for commenting! ♥

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desfinado July 15 2011, 21:43:13 UTC

Wooo, so glad you like it! Cute and hot make for a pretty sweet combination :D

tsubasa_no_ryu July 15 2011, 20:32:21 UTC

OMG three new stories! *___* Clearly this kissing meme is the best thing ever!

Ahahaha they are so ridiculous. Banana Boat, wtaf? XD I love how you keep alternating totally fucking hot with absolutely hilarious - like how you took the phrase his mouth sliding hot and wet up Mikey's cheek and into his hair and then changed that rather sexy image into the most hilarious thing ever when you added shoving his tongue into Mikey's ear in the least sexy wet willy ever. It's those ridiculous details - clammy hand, oh my god, I have no idea why that's so funny but it is - that make this seem totally realistic.

And then how Mikey's mentally bitching all throughout about how Pete's not kissing him properly, and then he comes and Pete's the one complaining that Mikey's the one that's crap at kissing! LOL.

This bit made me crack up: Mikey can hear Pete wiping his hands off on the door on either side of them. It doesn't sound very effective.

And this bit was just hot and amazing and beautifully written: His legs are trembling with the effort ( ... )

desfinado July 15 2011, 21:45:11 UTC

LOL it was a lot of fun, thanks for reading and commenting! ♥

I'm glad you feel that way! In my opinion, the best sex usually ISN'T free of laughter or unsexy moments that you just have to laugh at - so I love writing that too.

So happy you liked it :D