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[desfinado]

Title: Worst Ever
Author: desfinado
Pairing: Mikey/Pete
Rating: R
Word count: 633
Disclaimer: They don't belong to me; not making a profit.
Summary: Pete's forgotten to keep kissing him again.
Notes: Written for the bandom kissing meme prompt "Pete/Mikey, during sex" ( here)

Comments

[tsubasa_no_ryu]

OMG three new stories! *___* Clearly this kissing meme is the best thing ever!

Ahahaha they are so ridiculous. Banana Boat, wtaf? XD I love how you keep alternating totally fucking hot with absolutely hilarious - like how you took the phrase his mouth sliding hot and wet up Mikey's cheek and into his hair and then changed that rather sexy image into the most hilarious thing ever when you added shoving his tongue into Mikey's ear in the least sexy wet willy ever. It's those ridiculous details - clammy hand, oh my god, I have no idea why that's so funny but it is - that make this seem totally realistic.

And then how Mikey's mentally bitching all throughout about how Pete's not kissing him properly, and then he comes and Pete's the one complaining that Mikey's the one that's crap at kissing! LOL.

This bit made me crack up: Mikey can hear Pete wiping his hands off on the door on either side of them. It doesn't sound very effective.

And this bit was just hot and amazing and beautifully written: His legs are trembling with the effort of holding himself up on the balls of his feet, knees digging into the wall to keep them lined up. "God, I can feel all of you, it's... ungh."

[desfinado]

LOL it was a lot of fun, thanks for reading and commenting! ♥

I'm glad you feel that way! In my opinion, the best sex usually ISN'T free of laughter or unsexy moments that you just have to laugh at - so I love writing that too.

So happy you liked it :D