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[descartes_rock]

love is more thicker than forget
e. e. cummings

love is more thicker than forget
more thinner than recall
more seldom than a wave is wet
more frequent than to fail
it is most mad and moonly
and less it shall unbe
than all the sea which only
is deeper than the sea
love is less always than to win
less never than alive
less bigger than the least begin
less littler

Comments

[mardeen]

Stuff like this is the reason I know I am not a poet. This is beautiful. I am going to change the name of my site to "most mad and moonly"...wonderful!

[descartes_rock]

Appreciate your art for what it is and EE Cummings' for what it is. I try hard not to compare stuff. There is some Cummings I absolutely dont like and some Mardeen I love. Your poetry is your own unique gift to God.