Naruto: Breaking the Rules (SasuNaru)

[des_butterfly]

Naruto was frowning at him now, like he’d just told him he wasn’t allowed to eat ramen for a year or something.  Stupid.  Why was he looking so disappointed?  It’s not like Sasuke was ever going to return the favour so…

“Why not?”

“Because I don’t want you to,” Sasuke said, frowning back and shifting a bit from where Naruto already had his

Comments

[sakanda]

That was amazing, and sexy, and man, I love your detail.
You write them so effing in character it hurts.
No words, just so amazingly, brilliantly, hot.

Bravo.

(Also, you had a little typo. 'Sasuke looked away and turned his head, suddenyl self-conscious.')

[des_butterfly]

Thanks for the catch. I'm horrible about typos. XD

[mija711]

hehehe I sooo loved that lol, and Sasuke still thinks he has the uppper hand huh??? lmaoooo but awwwwwww naruto just wanted to make him feel good, silly prideful Uchiha...this was hot and soo the way I would see them going about it, they would argue through all of it I think lol, great fic as always, thanks for the read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

[anonymous]

That was amazingly hot.

[loika]

Oooooooooh man, you seriously write the hottest stuff. ♥ Totally mem'ing this with like, 29034 of your other fics.

(And is the second last line meant to be "he thought as he started to stroke"? :0)

[elict]

Ah.......ah!

*braindead*