Naruto: Breaking the Rules (SasuNaru)

Mar 24, 2007 02:22

Naruto was frowning at him now, like he’d just told him he wasn’t allowed to eat ramen for a year or something.  Stupid.  Why was he looking so disappointed?  It’s not like Sasuke was ever going to return the favour so…

“Why not?”

“Because I don’t want you to,” Sasuke said, frowning back and shifting a bit from where Naruto already had his ( Read more... )

naruto/sasuke, smut, sasuke, naruto

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chanelcoco March 24 2007, 11:20:28 UTC
Obviously Naruto should have something in his mouth at all times to keep him from saying retarded shit.

Ooh, already thinking of the next time, eh Sasuke? (;

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mh_escapee March 24 2007, 15:05:23 UTC
Oh, you write so sexily.

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beachlass March 24 2007, 16:07:22 UTC
Add mine to the chorus of hot and in character. Pissy-can't-admit-what-he-wants Sasuke and unflinchily-determined Naruto. Umph.

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bakkhos March 24 2007, 16:55:29 UTC
“I know you fucking liked it when I went down on you last time. You moaned loud enough when I-”
Oh. Ohhhhhhh!

“Fine,” he said. “If you want to humiliate me that badly, just do it and get it over with.”
One of the things I love about Sasuke is his twisted logic. Win.

Obviously Naruto should have something in his mouth at all times to keep him from saying retarded shit.
ROFL!

I'm going to take the risk of sounding redundant, but the struggle here, the characterization, makes this so hot.

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desert_anbu March 24 2007, 17:13:30 UTC
Sexy and adorable and funny all in one. <3

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