Dollhouse fic - Evaluation Day; PG-13

[derevko_child]

Title: Evaluation Day
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Adelle DeWitt, Laurence Dominic, Boyd Langton, Topher Brink
Pairing: DeWitt/Dominic. If you squint.
Disclaimer: Nope, don't own them. Never will.
Words: 6,715
Spoilers: Up to 2x06
Summary: Countless tales have been told about men falling asleep and upon waking, discover that years have passed and the

Comments

[amzzzziohi]

OMG! I demand a sequel!!! Wow!

[derevko_child]

I feel like I need to point out that this is already a sequel to another fic. Lawlz.

[amzzzziohi]

lol I know, I know (and I love it too!), but I seriously just love your fics lol :D It's serious dark awesomeness, that torture technique seriously sends chills down my spine, I feel for Dom.

[derevko_child]

Hee. Thanks. (serious dark awesomeness makes me giggle...)

I'll think about a sequel (post 2x07 seems ripe for writing, but considering I can't rewatch the episode, the task seems daunting. heh).

Thanks again. :)

[aka_katya]

This is all sorts of dark awesomeness!!!!! Also I'm totally in love with Head!Dominic, like I kinda want a whole series of fics with him!

[derevko_child]

Thanks :)

A series of fics with head!Dominic? But what about real!Dom? (omg, I could see it in my head. Adelle seeing two Dominics, one being all angsty because he's the real one and the other one being cool and criticizing his real self. lawlz)

[aka_katya]

OMG! Adelle/Dominic/Head!Dominic !!!!!!!! I totally ship it!

[juliet316]

Wow! Twisty and chilling.

[derevko_child]

Thank you :) (I also feel bad for DeWitt because she has no idea that Dominic's knowledge of her is going to be used against her).

[juliet316]

You realize just for that statement alone, this calls for sequel right?

[just_drifting_6]

Thank you for relieving my boredom, omg. And, the fic... What to say, what to say? I loved it, of course. I liked how you split it up, with Dom's POV first, then Adelle, then Dom, etc. and how Dom's POV went backwards, sort of. I also liked how you revealed to us gradually what was going on, that at first we actually thought it was years later, then slowly we learnt it was just a horrible trick. Poor Dominic! God, the guy never gets a break, does he?

I noticed you used the name Hoffman again, like with that other fic you wrote ages ago (that was you, wasn't it?). I kept getting flashbacks to her, even though they're completely different people.

And, lastly, I just adore the beginning and ending. Countless tales have been told about men falling asleep and upon waking, discover that years have passed and the world has changed without them.

This might be one of them. and then, This is not one of them. Just...wow.

[derevko_child]

I was kinda nervous about the style I used, actually, because when I first started writing, I confused myself. Haha.

I already introduced Hoffman, actually, she's in Though This Be The Last Pain She Makes Me Suffer

Adelle doesn't get a break either. She didn't know Dominic's knowledge of her will be used against her. But yeah, Dom always get tortured. heh.

Thank you for your lovely comment :)

[just_drifting_6]

It's the same person?! :/ I feel like an idiot now. I thought you were just re-using the name. My bad.

People need to write more fluff for these people! Like, where they get to be happy and in love. Not that it will ever happen but still!

[derevko_child]

Lol, no worries. I should probably put that bit about Hoffman up in the notes. Hee.

But angsty!D/D is funner to read! :P

[nallain]

My my, great fic! I read "Thought this be the last pain she makes me suffer" a long, long time ago and I actually didn`t remember reading it, but then I was like "Ooh, right, THAT girl!" Very intricate, btw! Deserves to continue!!

[derevko_child]

Thanks you :)

I'm also glad that Hoffman sort of made an impression in the previous fic that you remembered her when she appeared here.