Dollhouse fic - Evaluation Day; PG-13

[derevko_child]

Title: Evaluation Day
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Adelle DeWitt, Laurence Dominic, Boyd Langton, Topher Brink
Pairing: DeWitt/Dominic. If you squint.
Disclaimer: Nope, don't own them. Never will.
Words: 6,715
Spoilers: Up to 2x06
Summary: Countless tales have been told about men falling asleep and upon waking, discover that years have passed and the

Comments

[just_drifting_6]

Thank you for relieving my boredom, omg. And, the fic... What to say, what to say? I loved it, of course. I liked how you split it up, with Dom's POV first, then Adelle, then Dom, etc. and how Dom's POV went backwards, sort of. I also liked how you revealed to us gradually what was going on, that at first we actually thought it was years later, then slowly we learnt it was just a horrible trick. Poor Dominic! God, the guy never gets a break, does he?

I noticed you used the name Hoffman again, like with that other fic you wrote ages ago (that was you, wasn't it?). I kept getting flashbacks to her, even though they're completely different people.

And, lastly, I just adore the beginning and ending. Countless tales have been told about men falling asleep and upon waking, discover that years have passed and the world has changed without them.

This might be one of them. and then, This is not one of them. Just...wow.

[derevko_child]

I was kinda nervous about the style I used, actually, because when I first started writing, I confused myself. Haha.

I already introduced Hoffman, actually, she's in Though This Be The Last Pain She Makes Me Suffer

Adelle doesn't get a break either. She didn't know Dominic's knowledge of her will be used against her. But yeah, Dom always get tortured. heh.

Thank you for your lovely comment :)

[just_drifting_6]

It's the same person?! :/ I feel like an idiot now. I thought you were just re-using the name. My bad.

People need to write more fluff for these people! Like, where they get to be happy and in love. Not that it will ever happen but still!

[derevko_child]

Lol, no worries. I should probably put that bit about Hoffman up in the notes. Hee.

But angsty!D/D is funner to read! :P

[just_drifting_6]

It did occur to me that she was the same person, but I thought Hoffman was supposed to be older than Adelle, but maybe I just assumed that because Jamie called her Nana.

Angsty D/D is amazing and we wouldn't be here if we didn't like it! But fluff is fun too.

Btw, I found your twitter. Mind if I stalk you there too?

[derevko_child]

Go ahead :) I'll follow you back XD