Comments | deraliaearth: Vacation

hanuueshe in deraliaearth

Vacation

Aug 23, 2009 20:05

rating: r, romance, i posted this somewhere else, drabble, ianto jones, angst, time travel is a plot device, jack/ianto, straight up doctor who/torchwood, one shots, canon coda, rating:r

Comments 15

mtgat August 26 2009, 04:22:41 UTC

This is my heart. This is my heart breaking. Ow. Good, but ow.

hanuueshe August 30 2009, 16:54:21 UTC

Sorry. *passes band-aid*

I'm glad you thought it was good, though.

cool_tre_cool August 26 2009, 04:35:17 UTC

Oh, that's heartbreaking that end bit. But a nice Fail!sex scene *snicker*

hanuueshe August 30 2009, 17:01:46 UTC

Thank you!

I'm glad this came off well. I was afraid it wouldn't be obvious where Jack was coming from (or that it would be too obvious, and no one would find the fail!sex funny).

timberwolfoz August 26 2009, 05:48:49 UTC

Awwwww... in both senses of the word.

hanuueshe August 30 2009, 17:02:15 UTC

Thanks. :D

samueljames August 26 2009, 10:20:34 UTC

Really sweet and then a little sad.

hanuueshe August 30 2009, 17:13:48 UTC

That's about what I was aiming for. Thanks for reading.

rammstein_twood August 26 2009, 21:21:01 UTC

loved it!
esp this bit :D - Jack was naked, the way only Jack could be naked: so unselfconscious you really could believe that nude was his outfit of choice, if you weren’t aware of how attached Jack was to his coat.

xxx

hanuueshe August 30 2009, 17:11:46 UTC

That line does seem to be a favorite. Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it.