Fic: Eyes (Lost/GA)

[bluesunsets]

Title: Eyes.
Fandom: Lost/Grey's Anatomy
Pairing/Character: Boone, Izzie; implied: Denny/Izzie, Boone/Shannon.
Spoilers/Warnings: Lost: Boone's death. GA: 3x01-3x17.
Disclaimer: Not mine. ;/
Word Count: 2446.
Rating: PG.
Summary: He helps her find closure.
Written For: cult_ships
Notes: This is just something that popped into my head. Feedback is love. ;)

Comments

[perfumedgraces]

I love this! It was freaking amazing! Especially since I love Lost and GA and Raines, which I think of because of the ghost thing. That was an ingenius way of doing it!

That was amazing. I love it, and I know you did wonderfully. IT DOESN'T SUCK. *stops herself from making a blowjob joke*

Seriously, it was beautiful and bittersweet and just PERFECT. I can't believe you had trouble with this! It was just so ... wow. I have no idea how you did it but it was so good!

GREAT JOB! ♥

[bluesunsets]

That was an ingenius way of doing it!

Aww, thanks. I just couldn't really think of anything that'd put Boone in the hospital, and I couldn't see Izzie modelling wedding dresses, so the ghost thing was the only way to go, and since I've practically forgotten EVERYTHING about Lost, I didn't want to risk getting facts wrong or being out of character.

That was amazing. I love it, and I know you did wonderfully. IT DOESN'T SUCK. *stops herself from making a blowjob joke*

Aww, thank you. And it doesn't suck penis? (LOL).

I can't believe you had trouble with this! It was just so ... wow. I have no idea how you did it but it was so good!

I just didn't know where I was going with it, you know? You write and write and then you can't seem to wrap it up in a bow and serve it on a golden platter. But thank you so much hon. ;)

♥

[fading_spark]

I loved it. I don't know what you were worried about because this was seriously seriously good. Seriously.

They seem so bright and alive

I love this. Actually I love all your descriptions of Boone but I found this particularly ironic because, y'know, he's dead. Whenever I write dead!person fic (lol that sounds weird) I always describe them as cold and dark feeling - you did the opposite and I liked it. It worked. Anyway, if Izzie was being followed around by a cold zombie-like creature she might freak out more. ;)

feels a tear slide sloppily down her cheek

I can't quite put my finger on why exactly, but I loved this description. I love "sloppily". It's so rarely used to describe something in fics. It's sort of tragically beautiful. ♥

I love how he called her Isobel at the start, and Izzie and Iz came later. I think it shows progession, shows that a more intimate reletionship slowly formed - not necessarily romantic, but intimate. Very very nice touch.

You're gonna make a hole in that bowl, IsobelHee, it rhymes! Sorry, I'm a

[fading_spark]

I like the mention of Flight 815 and that Izzie knew about it. That's something that sometimes gets forgotten in Lost-crossovers I think. I don't know, I just liked it. lol

continuing the smooth rhythm to mute music

The sound of small creaks and buzzing plays around the room like a soft instrument

I loved both those lines. They were seriously gorgeous. A nice, vague sort of imagery that's so suiting. I don't really know how to explain why I like it because it left me sort of mooshy and speechless but I love it. =D

She doesn't say anything as he presses his lips to her cheek, she closes her eyes and tries to take in the warmth that makes her cheek feel on fire, and when he pulls away, she opens her eyes and sees his comforting smirk and his eyes twinkling like they usually do whenever he's with her.

It's when she blinks he fades away.*wibble* Gorgeous ending. Y'know, I like that it wasn't really a romantic fic. This fit them well. Your concept was solid and you followed through. The platonic reletionship was believable.

[bluesunsets]

like the mention of Flight 815 and that Izzie knew about it.

Phew. I got the number right! I was worried about that. Seattle Grace is populated with whores and gossipers, so I wouldn't be surprised if they found out about this. I'm pretty sure everyone who watches TV or has a newspaper would have found out about the crash. ;) But her knowing this was a way of progressing through the story.

Gorgeous ending. Y'know, I like that it wasn't really a romantic fic. This fit them well. Your concept was solid and you followed through. The platonic reletionship was believable. Wonderful job, as usual. There was really no reason to be worried about it at all.

Aww, thank you. I wasn't sure on how to end it, but that scene between Alex and Izzie and the whole ‘closure' (pfft, A/I closure doesn't exist!) kind of gave me an idea to make that Boone and Izzie's goodbye scene.

But thank you so much!! ;) You're the bestest best BEST bifey EVER!! *huckles*

♥

[fading_spark]

Well you're the bestest best BEST wifey EVER too!!! Your fics are too good, they turn me into mush!! *huckles* ♥

[lil_orli]

loved this my two favourite shows crossed in a way i'd never imagined but that worked so well.

The way you described boone i could image him standing right next to me and him helping her let go of denny as she helps him let go of shannon beautiful would love to see a semi sequel when shannon dies.

[bluesunsets]

Aww, thank you. I'm not quite sure if there will be a sequel, it was intended to be a one-shot, but I guess we'll have to wait and see. ;)

♥

[bluesunsets]

Aww, I hope your heart mends. ;p I can see Denny wanting Boone to do it just right and I felt it necessary to kind of give a connection as to why it's Boone and not Denny doing the whole mending-Izzie. I wanted the last line, where it mentions Denny, to give this feel that Denny's the boss and Boone was his worker. =P

But thank you so much! ;)

♥

[slybrunette]

This is amazing. I mean, I saw the Lost/Grey's crossover and knew I was going to read it, but I am just blown away by the way you've done this. Wonderful job!

[bluesunsets]

Thank you very much. ;) I'm glad you liked it.

♥