Fic: Eyes (Lost/GA)
Title: Eyes.
Fandom: Lost/Grey's Anatomy
Pairing/Character: Boone, Izzie; implied: Denny/Izzie, Boone/Shannon.
Spoilers/Warnings: Lost: Boone's death. GA: 3x01-3x17.
Disclaimer: Not mine. ;/
Word Count: 2446.
Rating: PG.
Summary: He helps her find closure.
Written For: cult_ships
Notes: This is just something that popped into my head. Feedback is love. ;)
( He looks at her, his blue eyes are as soft as the wind, and it gives her that security blanket she's been yearning for. )
Fandom: Lost/Grey's Anatomy
Pairing/Character: Boone, Izzie; implied: Denny/Izzie, Boone/Shannon.
Spoilers/Warnings: Lost: Boone's death. GA: 3x01-3x17.
Disclaimer: Not mine. ;/
Word Count: 2446.
Rating: PG.
Summary: He helps her find closure.
Written For: cult_ships
Notes: This is just something that popped into my head. Feedback is love. ;)
( He looks at her, his blue eyes are as soft as the wind, and it gives her that security blanket she's been yearning for. )
They seem so bright and alive
I love this. Actually I love all your descriptions of Boone but I found this particularly ironic because, y'know, he's dead. Whenever I write dead!person fic (lol that sounds weird) I always describe them as cold and dark feeling - you did the opposite and I liked it. It worked. Anyway, if Izzie was being followed around by a cold zombie-like creature she might freak out more. ;)
feels a tear slide sloppily down her cheek
I can't quite put my finger on why exactly, but I loved this description. I love "sloppily". It's so rarely used to describe something in fics. It's sort of tragically beautiful. ♥
I love how he called her Isobel at the start, and Izzie and Iz came later. I think it shows progession, shows that a more intimate reletionship slowly formed - not necessarily romantic, but intimate. Very very nice touch.
You're gonna make a hole in that bowl, IsobelHee, it rhymes! Sorry, I'm a ( ... )
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continuing the smooth rhythm to mute music
The sound of small creaks and buzzing plays around the room like a soft instrument
I loved both those lines. They were seriously gorgeous. A nice, vague sort of imagery that's so suiting. I don't really know how to explain why I like it because it left me sort of mooshy and speechless but I love it. =D
She doesn't say anything as he presses his lips to her cheek, she closes her eyes and tries to take in the warmth that makes her cheek feel on fire, and when he pulls away, she opens her eyes and sees his comforting smirk and his eyes twinkling like they usually do whenever he's with her.
It's when she blinks he fades away.*wibble* Gorgeous ending. Y'know, I like that it wasn't really a romantic fic. This fit them well. Your concept was solid and you followed through. The platonic reletionship was believable. ( ... )
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Phew. I got the number right! I was worried about that. Seattle Grace is populated with whores and gossipers, so I wouldn't be surprised if they found out about this. I'm pretty sure everyone who watches TV or has a newspaper would have found out about the crash. ;) But her knowing this was a way of progressing through the story.
Gorgeous ending. Y'know, I like that it wasn't really a romantic fic. This fit them well. Your concept was solid and you followed through. The platonic reletionship was believable. Wonderful job, as usual. There was really no reason to be worried about it at all.
Aww, thank you. I wasn't sure on how to end it, but that scene between Alex and Izzie and the whole ‘closure' (pfft, A/I closure doesn't exist!) kind of gave me an idea to make that Boone and Izzie's goodbye scene.
But thank you so much!! ;) You're the bestest best BEST bifey EVER!! *huckles*
♥
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I just figured that if she's lying on her side the tear isn't going to go straight down her face. But I'm glad you read into it, if you did. ;)
I love how he called her Isobel at the start, and Izzie and Iz came later. I think it shows progession, shows that a more intimate reletionship slowly formed - not necessarily romantic, but intimate. Very very nice touch.
I think Boone would be the type to call her ‘Isobel', I just got this feeling that he'd be formal (maybe because he has money) but I'm glad you saw the progression in their relationship.
As they get closer and they open up to each other, hints are dropped about Boone and his past to her and I just love how you worked it. It's subtle to her, that sort of line is sort of toss-away if you don't know Boone - but to us, and to him, it means alot because we know what he's implying. If that makes sense. . . .It does. I know people say, "If you were trapped on a desert island what would you want with you?"and ( ... )
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