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Fic: Kiss You Later (OTH)

Jan 19, 2007 18:36

Title: Kiss You Later
Pairing/Character: Nathan/Brooke; Lucas/Brooke, Nathan/Haley, Lucas/Peyton
Spoilers/Warnings: Spoilers for all episodes.
Disclaimer: Not mine. ;/
Rating: M
Summary: She had everything she ever wanted, and in a single breath, she ran away. Back home, after two weeks of M.I.A., Brooke's homeless, heartbroken, and destroyed. In ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, fandom: one tree hill, ship: nathan/brooke, wip: kiss you later, character: brooke davis

Comments 9

perfumedgraces January 20 2007, 02:06:51 UTC

THAT WAS AMAZING.

*dies again*
*comes back to review*

Nathan laughs, "I love you too."

She feels a pang in her chest, and quickly dismisses it as she evenly says, "Hate you."

I love this! It's adorable and she has a crush on him! Which is totally identifiable. He's rather gorgeous XP.

It doesn't startle her, but it makes her stomach feel like it's floating as she approaches her husband-to-be, Nathan Scott.As I was reading that paragraph, I was thinking to myself. I said "self, I wonder if it'll be Nathan or Lucas?" and it was Nathan and I was glad because I hoped it would be! I really did :). I loved the scene between Rachel and Brooke because it felt real and alive and it was ... idk how else to put it. Real. It was like I was reading a book. I really loved this! Very in character, even though I only base Brooke's character off the other stories you've written ( ... )

bluesunsets January 20 2007, 03:38:26 UTC

you're the sweetest. you're my favourite person in teh world. and it's not just because of your good looks! :p

I love this! It's adorable and she has a crush on him! Which is totally identifiable. He's rather gorgeous XP.

*blush* well, who wouldn't? he looks good with hair, though. in the series, he had it shaved so it wasn't so spiky. i hate it when the guys with really good hair do that.

As I was reading that paragraph, I was thinking to myself. I said "self, I wonder if it'll be Nathan or Lucas?" and it was Nathan and I was glad because I hoped it would be!

i suck at cliffhangers. i really try, and i suck at them. even though that wasn't a cliffy cliffhanger, i'm glad you enjoyed it. i'm glad you hoped it was nathan. *teehee* i wonder what will happen after brooke's little dream. :p

I loved the scene between Rachel and Brooke because it felt real and alive and it was ... idk how else to put it. Real. It was like I was reading a book.

*awww* that's so . . . omg. seriously. you just killed me. man, i love you.

I think I could ( ... )

anonymous March 1 2007, 14:31:43 UTC

well! looks like i have found my new favorite Nathan/Brooke fic. ^_^ i love the way they banter with each other, it flows out of them so nicely. can't wait to read the next part. update soon! XD~~~*

kal_ella March 1 2007, 14:34:54 UTC

oops! i forgot to log-in. that was me, by the way. `=P

bluesunsets March 2 2007, 05:45:58 UTC

well! looks like i have found my new favorite Nathan/Brooke fic. ^_^

Aww. Thank you! :)

i love the way they banter with each other, it flows out of them so nicely.

I've always pictured that Nathan and Brooke would, somehow, get along. They barely have any scenes together in OTH that suggests some sort of friendship. I just hope that is captured within this fic.

Thank you for your review! I'll be sure to update real soon. =]

♥

x_fadeddreams_x March 1 2007, 16:27:59 UTC

I love this story-absolutely amazing! You should update soon! lol
-Allison

bluesunsets March 2 2007, 05:46:31 UTC

Aww, thank you! :)

♥

fading_spark April 13 2007, 11:44:52 UTC

HOW COULD YOU THINK THAT ENDING WAS BAD??? It was seriously awesome hon, this whole part was.

You've got the Brooke/Rachel banter down pat - they're all insults, insults, insults - but lovingly in a way. It's good to see that Brooke still has people that care about her even though she's lost so much - and Brooke and Rachel actually ended up being really good friends on the show. (although this is a zillion times better than the show *nods*)

And seriously, your Brooke/Nathan banter. FREAKING ROCKED THE HOUSE. SO, SO WELL WRITTEN HON. Dude, they're both goners. ;) Your characterization of the two of them is so fucking good - why aren't YOU writing the damn show????

♥!!!!

bluesunsets April 13 2007, 11:51:53 UTC

It was RUSHED. Couldn't you feel the rushedness!? (I doubt that's a word).

I'm always worried about my damn character voices, and I haven't seen season four Rachel/Brooke (don't know if I want to, with the way MS is being a complete assface) but thank you! SERIOUSLY! (Aww, thank you!!!!! *tackles*)

*blush* DUUUDE. You seriously know how to flatter someone. ;) I always thought the Nathan/Brooke banter on the show was seriously snippy and witty and all those things that I feel insecure about when I write two characters who are like that. I just think these two could be really good friends, if given the time and the chance.

This was AWESOME feedback, dude. SERIOUSLY. ;) (I don't really get feedback for my OTH stuff, anywho). =P

♥