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Masterpiece [Chapter 4]

Sep 08, 2008 19:29

Title: Masterpiece
Author: dephiPairing: RyoDa ( Read more... )

Comments 32

hanny2luv September 8 2008, 16:52:14 UTC

Yay, update*dancing happily*
Oh my, it's getting more and more interesting. I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next.

Thanks for updating.

dephi September 9 2008, 00:50:46 UTC

Huhuhu..
It'll take longer time for updating this..

Thanks for reading and commenting...:)

BTW, I miss you..♥
It's kinda hard to chat lately.. ToT

resolute_reader September 8 2008, 21:19:45 UTC

I think that Ryo and Ueda live at completely different levels of morality ( ... )

resolute_reader September 8 2008, 21:21:04 UTC

O.O

That was longer than I thought, sorry for the spam!

dephi September 9 2008, 00:56:36 UTC

Ah no no~
No worries
I like that...♥
LoL~
I was like, kyaaa.. It's longer yet I like that comment. Eh, following my writing length perhaps? Ahahah.. I don't know whether you noticed it or not but this chapter is about 1000 words longer than the previous chapters.. :P

About the morality things, well of coure. They grew up in a different kind of environment, right? So for ryo, since his family has this "side job", I suppose he had gotten through some thorough trainings or so? Is that make sense?
And that's why, he is a lonely person actually.. I don't know whether people could catch that from what I write. Well, although he has Jin and Pi (or you may include Kame and Kusano) beside him, it's just as if well, what can I say.. (I'm bad on describing things)

And yes, Erika is tougher than Ueda of course but her strength might not match Ryo's yet, but let's see later.. :3

Thanks for these comments as usual.. Oh how I love these.. :DD

shigeakko September 9 2008, 08:16:56 UTC

this fic getting more interesting~

kame had a feeling towards tatchan ne..
oww...evil ryo! did ryo really love tatchan? i hope so..
erika surely love tatchan ne..i love tatchan too!!

thx for the update!! and thx for fixing my mood~
before i read this fic, i was really in a very bad mood

dephi September 10 2008, 03:56:24 UTC

Eh..
Well, I suppose Kame's feeling isn't that kind of feeling.. LoL~
Got that?
Everybody love tat-chan nee~
Especially the author

Ahahaha...:DD
Eh? Bad mood? Why?

Thanks for reading and commenting too..^^

shigeakko September 10 2008, 08:31:21 UTC

lol~
not that kind of feeling ne..

my big bro really really naughty..i hate him as much as i love tatchan!!

btw, i've already made a ryoda fic, but it's still in indonesian..i really do want to change it into english..but i find it really really difficult and confusing...

and..if u don't mind..can u help me? *pleading eyes*

dephi September 10 2008, 09:12:54 UTC

Ah, sure..:)
I don't really mind..^^
And hopefully I really can help you.. :P
So, you're going to send it to me or so..?

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mizuno_hikaru September 9 2008, 12:46:49 UTC

erika knew?? (o.O)
i wondered what will she act later...
and the 'what if i die' note gave me a smile...
ryo, it's just a fever =D

and deph...another writer's block?
yeah, me too. not the muse, but the time. i didn't have enough time to write since i got a lot of assignments to do XDXD
and my beta didn't reply my mail...it's over a week already =p

dephi September 10 2008, 03:54:23 UTC

Ah lol~
Yeah..
Ryo is cute nee actually.. *i tried to make myself believe that*
LoL~~

Aw..
I'm quite free lately since I'm back to the 1st semester again. Huhu.. ToT
Orientation sucks so much!!

Ah really?
Well, your beta is busy maybe, dear.. :)

raixas September 9 2008, 14:40:43 UTC

waa~
the story is hooking me to it!
hope you update soon..
i really, really wanna know what happen next..

thankx 4 d update ne...
*give you tatchan to help you overcome the writer's block*

dephi September 10 2008, 03:57:59 UTC

Eh, realy?
*glad*
Hihihi..
*cough*I myself am feeling a bit hard to write the next chapter.. *cough*
:DDDD

Huhuhu...
Thanks for reading and commenting.. *am keeping Tat-chan in my house*