Fake [Chapter 4]

Aug 30, 2008 20:52

Title: Fake
Author: love_akiraPairing: PiDa (mainly), Akame(start this chapter), and some others ( Read more... )

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aloja August 30 2008, 14:19:43 UTC
this is getting more and more interesting!
I feel so sorry for tat-chan. and poor Pi too. another great chapter^^ looking forward for more!

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love_akira August 31 2008, 04:37:35 UTC
Thankies ^^
Let's wait for Dephi,ne.

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snow_meow August 30 2008, 16:38:43 UTC
I feel so sad for Tat-chan. It is a good thing he has Tacchon and Kame as his side.

It is so heartbreaking when a parent treats his child like this. I wish a miracle would happen and Tat-chan's mum will be ok again.

I hope that step-mother of his will not get a single dime. It would be interesting if all Tat-chan's family wealth is held in trust for him and that onna cannot get her hands on it.

Pi's feelings for Ueda are staring to show but he doesn't realise it as he is too focus on Ryo.

I cannot wait for the next chapter.

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love_akira August 31 2008, 04:39:41 UTC
Wow, i love your comment so much. It made my day.

You actually summarize the whole story for us...

Thanks...
Me too, can't wait for next chapter ..but Dephi has to update her other fics first too, so it'll take a bit long. Sry. ♥

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ylhen12 August 30 2008, 16:48:54 UTC
nice update^^
i feel sorry for both pi and ueda....
thanks for the update=^-^=

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love_akira August 31 2008, 04:40:37 UTC
thanks for reading too.

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resolute_reader August 30 2008, 18:29:39 UTC
Interesting, so Tacchon is his brother (sort of) and Kame is yakuza.

Darn it I have to leave, I'll write a better comment later.

Loved it!

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resolute_reader August 31 2008, 04:39:30 UTC
Pi has a crush on Ryo, but we know this is Pida so that should play out interestingly. It's like him to be open with himself about it, I can't see him denying it for too long, I liked that.

Isn't it interesting that we can be so blind about ourselves but so able to see stuff in others? Uchi is really a perfect example of that in this chapter.

Of course there are other possible scenarios. Such as, he knows Ryo likes him but he doesn't feel the same so he's trying to give Pi a chance. Or he's putting Pi before himself. Maybe he likes Ryo but he thinks Ryo likes Pi and he knows Pi likes Ryo. Or even Pi is seeing things that aren't there. It feels like the first to me but I can't wait to find out more.

Sorry for such a long comment, I just love trying to figure it out :3

Another interesting chapter, waiting for more ^^

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love_akira August 31 2008, 04:43:16 UTC
Another lovely comment....*huggles*

It's truth,ne...we tend to see stuff more in ppl than we do in ourselves.

Well, let's find out more in next chapie...
thanks

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resolute_reader August 31 2008, 05:05:50 UTC
I'm glad you like the comments because they get kind of long XD

Yes, let's wait together ^^

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haruhi_hikaru August 30 2008, 18:32:43 UTC
owh~! tatchan n tacchon sleep 2gether! *double tat mode on* \:D/
can't wait to see pida moment in later chapters :D

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love_akira August 31 2008, 04:44:35 UTC
wahhh, me too... *double tat mood*
hai hai
Thanks..

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