Goodbye

[dephi]

Title : Goodbye
Author : dephi
Pairing : Ryoda
Rating : PG - 13 for the angst
Disclaimer : I own the plot only. The title is taken from Juana's song.
Summary : A scar in one's heart can't be healed easily. There might even be someone else beside you, but it doesn't really help, or perhaps it is you who don't want to open your heart?
Notes : Written for karla_chiro

Comments

[karla_chiro]

first reading it ryt now i love you my dear..

[karla_chiro]

sugoi .....
i really like it....
ano... can i ask you a sequel???

the story is sad so is the the song.. but i'm happy and so glad you made it...
can tat-chan have a happy ending???
i love you so much hugs you tight....
i'm so happy...
thank you.... Thank you....

[dephi]

Ah, sequel.. I have expected that though.. :3
Sure, I'll make one, but it will take longer time since I'm going to have my University orientation again soon. And I think I should look for other song for the sequel, so both can be paired, or do you have any song recommendation again? :D

Glad that you like it..^^

[karla_chiro]

yay ok..
i'll be waiting....
good luck with your university orientation....

[aloja]

This was sad, but really good. it broke my heart, in a way that I can't really explain. Anyway I really liked it^^

[dephi]

Ah well, the song is sad so yeah..
Thanks for reading and commenting.. =)

[hanny2luv]

It's a bit sad, but it based on a sad song right.
And i want a sequel. Don't leave Tat-chan like that.

Anyway i still like it.

[dephi]

Yep, the song is sad, and I always write angst. LoL..

Sequel.. I shall look for other song first. Haha.. And you know that I have my orientation coming..

Thanks for reading and commenting.. ♥

[mizuno_hikaru]

ouh deph... it is so beautifully written~
i like it~!!
but the ending part is so sad... ;___;
both of them are sad *pats ryoda*
*poke poke for a sequel*

[dephi]

Eh, sequel? *hides*
Ah, just kidding, I'll write a sequel, but later.. xDD

Thanks for reading and commenting..^^

[resolute_reader]

"To love and lost is better than to not have loved at all"

We know Ueda doesn't believe in that. Who could expect him to? His previous relationships don't sound all that great to begin with and then he keeps getting dumped.

When the guy broke up with him it felt like Ueda would have forgiven everything just for the stability of having someone to care for him, to not leave him.

It makes it hard enough to believe in people but then there's also that self damaging feeling. That feeling like "I must not be good enough"

It's so sad, but so good. Loved it! (did I get it right this time?)

[dephi]

Yay.. Correct as usual.. *throwing candies*
Ueda is just too afraid, maybe paranoia? Well, something like that.. xDD

Thanks for reading and commenting.. ♥

[resolute_reader]

There's going to be a sequel?

Do you need a song? Because I keep on thinking of this one song "The Remedy (I won't worry)" by Jason Mraz.

I'm not sure if the whole thing works but it might give you an idea :3

[dephi]

Yes, too many people asking it.. :D
Eh, do you have the lyric?