[fanfic] You Don't Know [KakaSaku-ish]

Jun 13, 2012 13:18

Title: You Don't Know
Rating: T
Words: 4271
Warnings/Spoilers: None, unless you need a warning for unrequited love and heartache. I hope you like it.

It wasn't a bad way to love... )

fandom: naruto, fanfic, kakashi, sakura, rin

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Awesome anonymous June 14 2012, 12:47:43 UTC
I love the first chapter of this fanfic! hope you would have second chapter! (:

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Re: Awesome denilmo June 14 2012, 15:35:07 UTC
Thank you very much! ^_^
I hope to continue it; we'll just see where the muse takes me

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queridalaurinha June 14 2012, 14:38:03 UTC
Deni, it's beautiful! I would love for you to continue it, if you can find the time. (I know, you're done for school for now, but summer has a way of sucking you into activities for you and the family and then before you know it, it's back to school and -- wait a minute! What happened to fun-filled days of doing nothing in particular??? Yeah. *nods head knowingly*)

I especially loved your descriptions of Sakura's realization that she "liked" Kakashi, and then at the end, her confession. Sigh.

Anyway, thanks for sharing!

Laurinha

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denilmo June 14 2012, 15:39:13 UTC
*huggles*
It's been a minute since I've talked to you. I hope everything is well! ♥

Thank you ^_^
My muse is being quite fickle these days, so I'll have to see where he takes me with this one. But I think I'd like to keep it going (I don't even get much of a summer. My next term starts July 1st and I'm picking my next classes right now... I keep telling myself just a year and a half left. This degree better be worth it lol).

Thanks. I kinda thought that maybe her attraction to him would more creep up on her than be like a smack in the face. I'm glad it worked lol. Thanks for commenting!

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juniper_11 June 14 2012, 20:47:44 UTC
Ah! You just ripped my heart out! I would love for you to continue this. One more chapter that's all I ask.

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denilmo June 15 2012, 02:04:48 UTC
*hugs*

My muse has things kickin so... :)

I'm glad you liked it. ♥

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serenitytouched June 15 2012, 01:13:33 UTC
Deni.

I love you.

Write more or I'm going to die. I'll simply die.

So wonderful and quite heart wrenching. If your muse flees you, then I'm going on a manhunt for it and shake it until it complies to my wishes for you to write more.

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denilmo June 15 2012, 02:07:26 UTC
Oh noes!!! We can't have that so *takes muse by collar*

I'm happy that you liked it (and it's been good to write something, too)

♥ thank you

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anonymous June 20 2012, 13:02:37 UTC
RIGHT IN THE FEELS.

my heart broke as well in the end ;_;
i hope you continue this! im not really expecting a good/happy ending and i've always been curious how an unrequited kakasaku would play out and yours is really good. so hoping you'll have the time to! :)

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denilmo June 25 2012, 13:42:21 UTC
Oh no, I hope your feels are okay now lol

I plan on continuing it - at least one or two more chapters (at the most). I'm glad you've found this one to play out well ^_^
I hope the next one will, too

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