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demi_rabbit

Fic: A Hint Of Jealousy

Nov 07, 2009 02:45

Title: A Hint Of Jealousy
Rating: R! M! NC-friggin-17!
Genre: Angsty?Drama/Romance
Pairings or Characters: KyouHika, with a pre-established KyouKao relationship
Warnings: Smut. Shameless smut.
Summary: Because, in Hikaru's eyes, this relationship was wrong. And he'd do anything to usurp it.
Author's Notes: Enjoy. Done for the Ouran Kink Meme

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{fandom}ouran, {genra}fanfiction, {genra}yaoi

Comments 8

sono_blac November 7 2009, 21:23:55 UTC

I only read this because it was KyouHika. D< /was totally surprised that you would ever write that

Anyway~ hihi, from Lit~ ^^

demi_rabbit November 7 2009, 22:04:05 UTC

xDDD I love KyouTwins in any shape - although KyouKao IS still my favorite. Still, I do love 'em some smut~!

Hiya, Lit!! <3

silentflutter November 7 2009, 23:54:40 UTC

So this was you! Fabulous, darling. I ♥'ed it to pieces... incredibly hot, and the fact that Kyoya had no idea (well in the first ending, anyway).

Imouto-chan how I've missed thee...hehe... ceile_chan November 16 2009, 00:04:54 UTC

So I'm just getting back into my LJ realm after a lengthy absence due to none other than Real Life (TM). Wow, it's the suck. It's all I can do to keep steady on my own projects, and it is tough to find time to enjoy the work of others ( ... )

Re: Imouto-chan how I've missed thee...hehe... demi_rabbit November 17 2009, 04:16:15 UTC

Ah!! Darling!!! Real life does have a tendency to...well, suck on monkey tails. ^^ I am happy you've returned, though, and I'm especially glad you liked this~! ^^ I liked writing it to a degree (although when I thought about Hikaru being that mean, I near cried!).We shared the 'pound-'em' state of mind for a while but I'm glad you alternativly found some empathy~

Whoo~ I shall catch joo as you swoon! ^^ I'm always enthrealled when someone enjoys my fictions that much~!! *muses with*

~ ZE IMOUTO-CHAN!!!

sleigh_belle November 20 2009, 15:41:08 UTC

So I liked it. You have a good grasp of character, which sadly many lack, so it is enjoyable to read your works. As far as the ending goes I think I would like to put in a request for version 3, which would be a combination of one and two. I like Kyouya letting Hikaru know he knows and trying to impart both guilt on Hikaru as well as having his own guilt for not getting it sooner but I like the anniversary line as a means to accomplish both those points. So I think I may join them up in my head as my own private ending.

demi_rabbit November 21 2009, 00:40:09 UTC

xDDD By all means, spin all the endings together as you'd wish! :D I'm glad you liked it, and that my characterization was up to standard (I'd hope, after nearly a year, it would be^^). The anniversary part was originally just for Hikaru to feel the guilt - with the stomachdroppingoutofbottom 'oh shit' sensation of knowing he really fuck'ed things up - but I agree with you; combinding the two would be awesome, I just have no way for it to work in, so I split them up.

Still, glad you liked it!

sleigh_belle November 21 2009, 01:36:12 UTC

Ceile-chan will back me up on this but I am a character purist. I firmly believe that you can get anyone, to act anyway, given the proper motivation so there is no reason for OOC-ness. You'd be surprised at the number of people who can't keep their people in character regardless of how long they have been writing for them. So from me that is a compliment of the highest order.