Fic: A Hint Of Jealousy

[demi_rabbit]

Title: A Hint Of Jealousy
Rating: R! M! NC-friggin-17!
Genre: Angsty?Drama/Romance
Pairings or Characters: KyouHika, with a pre-established KyouKao relationship
Warnings: Smut. Shameless smut.
Summary: Because, in Hikaru's eyes, this relationship was wrong. And he'd do anything to usurp it.
Author's Notes: Enjoy. Done for the Ouran Kink Meme

It’s not a

Comments

Imouto-chan how I've missed thee...hehe...

[ceile_chan]

So I'm just getting back into my LJ realm after a lengthy absence due to none other than Real Life (TM). Wow, it's the suck. It's all I can do to keep steady on my own projects, and it is tough to find time to enjoy the work of others.

But, thankfully, like a ray of sunshine into my dismal Real Life, comes another nicely done one-shot from demi-chan! I really liked this fic (Partial to the 2nd ending personally). I think it's saucy without being too vulgar, and poignant where it needs to be. I kind of wanted to pound them both on the heads, and you manage to create a situation where the reader wants to alternately sympathize and beat them up, all in the neatly crafted confines of a one-shot fiction. Well done.

Mechanics wise, it didn't have any glaring issues, and the stylistic tone you used was quite consistent and fluid throughout. Thanks for another little fic for me to swoon over, and I'll try very hard not to be such a stranger. Gah. If only I didn't need a Real Life Job....*wistful musings of your Nee-san*

Luvya, demi-chan, and good work.

~Your Loving (If often absent) Nee-san

Re: Imouto-chan how I've missed thee...hehe...

[demi_rabbit]

Ah!! Darling!!! Real life does have a tendency to...well, suck on monkey tails. ^^ I am happy you've returned, though, and I'm especially glad you liked this~! ^^ I liked writing it to a degree (although when I thought about Hikaru being that mean, I near cried!).We shared the 'pound-'em' state of mind for a while but I'm glad you alternativly found some empathy~

Whoo~ I shall catch joo as you swoon! ^^ I'm always enthrealled when someone enjoys my fictions that much~!! *muses with*

~ ZE IMOUTO-CHAN!!!