[fic] see you around. [chapter ii: protect me]

[delphien]

 

Comments

[melancholicsky]

'There’s silence on the other side of the door as every word stabs Jaejoong through the heart, truth, truth, truth, and the blankets rustle as he takes out his frustration.'

That was lovely. I really like your use of the present tense (and you update so quickly!) Will definitely continue reading :)

[delphien]

thank you (: t'is one of my favourite lines in there as well.
i have chapters typed out in advance on a word document d: glad you enjoy it ♥

[theinvisibleink]

that incident seems to be affecting jae so much, doesn't it? but i'm glad he's softening up to su at least

[delphien]

i know, poor jae :(
and poor su, too XD i think jae could look pretty scary if he tried.

[xiahtism]

aww the wall between down...
hope su can briing it downn... ^^ go on to the next~

thx

[anonymojaniz]

WTF 70" TV?

yes, that is my comment.

[delphien]

yeah well
artistic license = immense exaggeration

[reya13]