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"as freedom is a breakfastfood" - 3

Jun 14, 2015 00:20

"as freedom is a breakfastfood"
kai/d.o/krystal, au, pg, 5301 words
eighteen is an age of badly made decisions and irreversible ups and downs. jongin, soojung, and kyungsoo navigate their last year of high school.

i can be found here if you ever want to talk to me!

( A sudden thought of what it would be like to be Soojung creeps into his head. Kyungsoo crushes it before it can grow. )

♡: jongin, ♡: krystal, ♡: kyungsoo, #chaptered

Comments 15

atheend June 13 2015, 17:29:12 UTC

After reading this I realize that this is chaptered and I just read chapter 3 hahahahahahaaha
Anyways I'm going to read 1 and 2 because this seems really good!!!
I'll look forward to more!!!

pinkiikis June 14 2015, 13:09:47 UTC

I know right.

hypothermal June 17 2015, 15:56:25 UTC

haha yeah it's chaptered! and pretty long too, so i'm glad you like it so far :)

thanks for reading this!

slowitdownbaby June 13 2015, 19:38:20 UTC

Kyungsoo concentrates on keeping them stable instead. He’s never been very good at doing two things at the same time.

Foreboding, foreshadowing and so amazing.
I thought I had an idea of where this story might go but now I have no idea lol.

hypothermal June 17 2015, 15:57:08 UTC

haha it's ok because the next chapter is up and you will know EVERYTHING now. or will you ;)

thanks for reading!

kagamiwa June 14 2015, 06:18:42 UTC

okay, i am going to try to be constructive and structure but this is going to collapse into a flailing session i can feel it

firstly,

GROWING TENSION BETWEEN JONGIN/KYUNGSOO I AM ALL FOR IT because how could someone as cool and laidback as jongin lose to a nerd like kyungsoo??? romantic plot aside, kyungsoo is still the friend who gets left out of things and the friend who well isn't really the friend, and after a while that gets very tiring and kind of hurts you i guess. which is why i love that scene between soojung/kyungsoo where she gets all deep and un-teenager-y and goes

“I think… we too often take silence as consent to hurt people where it does the most. If they don’t say anything, how can anyone know that they actually feel pain? Maybe that’s why we do it. People who don’t scream from the pain get hurt the most.”this speaks volumes to me, because SOOJUNG YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT HIM ( ... )

kirakirashahida June 14 2015, 14:06:55 UTC

same

hypothermal June 17 2015, 15:59:22 UTC

yeah i was like hmmm you two have a rivalry that you don't even know about, don't you?? but you're right about ksoo though, he's almost always neglected, and they don't mean it, but it hurts more because of that. soojung is supposed to be the most introspective of the three, but i think sometimes even she misses the gravity of her words and how they apply to her situation at hand.

you can see how the dynamics play out now because CHAPTER FOUR IS UP thanks for reading <3 you are always so ~cool~

kirakirashahida June 14 2015, 14:36:28 UTC

hm ok so i read this in bed last night so i might have missed some things

like i said previously the friendship between the three of them is pretty much picture perfect, yet you can never tell what's really happening. i think it's like that kind of calmness before a storm hits. well, for starters soojung has already exploded at jongin. right now i feel like they all are trying very hard to maintain the same atmosphere between them - like soojung arranging that stargazing thing and kyungsoo skipping a class so he can join although he never did that - so on the surface everything looks just fine but actually it's all kind of messy because there are some things that they hide from each other. and those things will either make or break their friendship depending on how they handle the situation ( ... )

hypothermal June 17 2015, 16:10:24 UTC

ohhhhh yeahhh i mean the thing about them is that they're all friends but they have very little knowledge about what is being withheld from them and is that a good thing or no? we don't actually know BUT MAYBE WE DO NOW well that's in the next chapter you have to see it for yourself ;)

haha tell me about theses guesses tell meeeeeee

xkayye June 15 2015, 14:22:41 UTC

Jongin doesn’t know if it’s appropriate to actually feel upset about something that he has no idea how to define.

This feeling!!! Oh gooooosh!!! It's so so soooooo ironic, because, ugh!
I can really relate to how Kyungsoo weighs his thoughts.
Like he doesn't feel that important but DUDE DO YOU KNOW HOW IMPORTANT AND ON POINT YOUR THOUGHTS ARE?!
They all have a lot to discover about themselves and the changes that are about to come...especially for Jongin and Soojung.
It really feels terrifying...for me at least, because bbs are still 18 here and 18 is not the best age to feel things all at once, hahaha.
You gave me mixed feelings for this chapter. It's really that engrossing!
Definitely looking forward to how everything will play out in the next chapter ^^

hypothermal June 17 2015, 16:12:25 UTC

jongin can be super perceptive about things sometimes but ahhh so dense at other times so he's like, i have no idea. but yeah! i relate to kyungsoo a lot too so i find it important that his thoughts are important, but he just doesn't know it. because he carries a lot on his shoulders, and that's sad isn't it.

ok you will see how it plays out because the next chapter! is! up!

thanks for reading!