To Boldly Go Where No Man Has Gone Before Sam/Dean & J2 Comment-fic Meme

[deirdre_c]

I think it's about time to do start this up again. How about this round let's have some commentfic and art about Uranus SPACE.

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[zubeneschamali]

A space station is a lot like an old-fashioned Earthly truck stop. Including the "lot lizards."

[brutti_ma_buoni]

Ugh, this went a little too Cinderella on me. But fwiw:

Title: Three Steps Past Triton
Rating: R
Words: 1400

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The hangar lock ain't exactly romance central, but there's plenty of sex for sale here. Sixteen months on a freighter'd make any spacer think pretty much anything other than his own hand and his own skanky crew look like a banquet. Jensen's seen it often, and done it enough to not condemn Nix and Wack for the glee with which they pounce on a pair of rank-looking nightbirds, all cheap stink, ragged net and slick silver on mouth and tits.

These days, Jensen thinks first. He thinks about the high likelihood of disease among these unfortunate whores, and the even higher rate of sleazebag pimps and lovers who hang about them, ready to part a careless spacer from his hard-earned. Now, Jensen can handle himself in any fight you care to name - last guy to find that out died with a blade in his eyeball, and a look of great surprise - but these days, he's older, more cautious, more tired. And, given the choice, he'll mostly

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[brutti_ma_buoni]

Jensen's risked this before. Not with whores, mind. But some days you have to go with a good feeling in your gut, and he's not been wrong too often. And, if he is, there's plenty that go into deep space and never return, and nobody asks too much about their fate. So. Let's try something where it's a win for Jensen either way.

"Kid? Giving you a choice," and he watches as the kid brightens, interested, even if for all he knows all Jensen's offering is a pick of ass or mouth, or extra cash for bareskinning or whatever. But Jensen suspects the kid sees straight through him, to the other possibilities Jensen's been mulling.

"Give you double rates to spend an hour with me, swallow me down, make me see stars, then fuck me like you mean it." Jensen has pretty specific needs, and lots of kid whores would blink at them, he not being their typical clientele.

Not this kid. His cheeks pinken right up, but with arousal not confusion, belly muscles showing sharp under his shirt as his balls draw up, gut tightening with a so-clear want that's

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[cassiopeia7]

♥ ! I dunno about "Cinderella," but this is a wonderful interpretation of the prompt! You made me really care about these two, so much that I'd like to see more of this.

. . . please? :D

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[brutti_ma_buoni]

Well, maybe more Pretty Woman, but eh. I like happy endings, even if unlikely.

I don't know there's likely to be more, but there is *potential*, you know?

[zubeneschamali]

Oh my gosh, this is fantastic. (No such thing as too much Cinderella, IMHO). Jensen's voice was sparkling clear in this, and those last two paragraphs especially show so much insight into both boys in such little space, it's amazing. Thank you!!!!!!! <3 <3 <3

[brutti_ma_buoni]

I try hard for gritty sometimes, and yet I love happy endings. So. I'm glad you like the result of my deep inner conflict! (The POV voice is influenced by another prompt that wanted Sam/Dean in Firefly, btw. Jensen isn't Mal Reynolds here, but they're spiritual cousins. Especially glad that part worked for you.)

[brutti_ma_buoni]

So, uh, eventually this comment fic turned into a full-length fic. And it's all thanks to space comment fic and, ultimately, your prompt. Here, if you'd like to read more...

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[snickfic]

Awww! I liked this a lot. Jared, getting his chance.

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[brutti_ma_buoni]

*g* Schmoopy hooker fic, I am your author. *headdesk* Still, I like the characters here, glad you did too!

[deirdre_c]

Ai, I'm sorry I'm so late in responding, I was away all weekend with horrible internet access. But I was able to read this on my phone and it sunk its hooks in me DEEP, I tell you. Such a cool concept and such wonderful execution (tremendous character voices for both boys)!!!

And: "But, sir? Am I not allowed to fuck you on board?" And he looks upset, undecided even.

Eeeeeee! MFEO!!! \o/

I could read about these two forever. *_*

[brutti_ma_buoni]

I *may* write some more of this. Thinking about it, anyway. I'm still kind of dabbling in SPN and mostly writing shorts and comment fic, but this might just have legs. We'll see.

[deirdre_c]

Well, let me know if I can bribe you with fresh-baked cookies or pictures of Jared shirtless or anything else that might urge you along in this direction. ;)

[brutti_ma_buoni]

This is now a very long time ago, but despite the total absence of shirtless Jared pictures, I did write a full-length fic about these two. Which, ultimately, is due to this comment ficathon and its luscious prompts. The proper story is here, if you'd like to read it.

[deirdre_c]

Wow, that's fantastic news! It's a crazy time of year, but I'm definitely bookmarking this for a read. I love this original snippet and can't wait to hear where you've taken them! :)

[hunters_retreat]

This was amazing! And I'm on board with everyone else who said they could read more :P I loved how Jensen knew Jared was out of place and was willing to take a chance on him. And I love that Jared wants to go so bad, but he still wants to sleep with Jensen if he can :P And I love that Jensen takes him along even if it isn't the smart thing to do but he follows his gut :P