To Boldly Go Where No Man Has Gone Before Sam/Dean & J2 Comment-fic Meme

[deirdre_c]

I think it's about time to do start this up again. How about this round let's have some commentfic and art about Uranus SPACE.

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Three Steps Past Triton (2/2)

[brutti_ma_buoni]

Jensen's risked this before. Not with whores, mind. But some days you have to go with a good feeling in your gut, and he's not been wrong too often. And, if he is, there's plenty that go into deep space and never return, and nobody asks too much about their fate. So. Let's try something where it's a win for Jensen either way.

"Kid? Giving you a choice," and he watches as the kid brightens, interested, even if for all he knows all Jensen's offering is a pick of ass or mouth, or extra cash for bareskinning or whatever. But Jensen suspects the kid sees straight through him, to the other possibilities Jensen's been mulling.

"Give you double rates to spend an hour with me, swallow me down, make me see stars, then fuck me like you mean it." Jensen has pretty specific needs, and lots of kid whores would blink at them, he not being their typical clientele.

Not this kid. His cheeks pinken right up, but with arousal not confusion, belly muscles showing sharp under his shirt as his balls draw up, gut tightening with a so-clear want that's survived however long blowing ancient sweaty spacers just off their boats. Jensen almost forgets the second part in knowing this kid can give him what he'd most enjoy. But- "Or," he manages, "Or you can sign on with me on the Lucifer."

The kid just blinks. Probably thinks it's a joke or a trick. Jensen expands. "Got a rookie berth if you wanted. Pay's shit. Work's hard. Two years out, at best, and you won't be the same person when you come home. If you come home. But-" He casts a look around the lock; the oily film on surfaces; the three girls and one guy that haven't managed to hitch with even desperate deep-spacers just off-board. "'M guessing you don't have much you'll miss."

"You mean it?" asks the kid, all tremulous and disbelieving. "Because, sir, I'd do anything to get aboard. For pay, on the books for real? Double anything." His hands are reaching out, to touch Jensen in ways that can't be mistook.

He steps back. "Careful, kid. Could be a trickster, out for a freebie. But I don't take advantage of my crew that way. And if you're signing on my ship, my two hour window just vanished. We'll need to get you booked and outfitted, find you a berth and an overseer-" When whoever got the job got his dick out of whichever of the kid's colleagues he'd picked up, that would be. Meantime, he's the captain's problem. Jensen's moving off, head full of necessary tasks.

The kid stops him, hand on his arm, and slays Jensen with a simple question. "But, sir? Am I not allowed to fuck you on board?" And he looks upset, undecided even. Now, Jensen remembers being eighteen and dick-ruled, but he's pretty sure there's more to this. Like, the kid might even actually want him. For real.

It's been a real long time since Jensen had that feeling. And it'll cause hell if the captain plays favourites with a rookie and-

Aw, fuck it. Jensen's not a saint. Never had ambitions in that direction.

"Not till we're out in the deep," he says. "And then only if you should choose to ask me. No payment. No obligations. You ain't a whore no more. You clear, crewman- Crewman whatsyername?"

The kid laughs, and tells him. He's still a bruised, slick-clad whore on the surface, but even more than when Jensen first laid eyes on him, he doesn't entirely look the part. Holding himself differently, darting off to collect a small stash from the lock-keeper, waving enthusiastic goodbyes to fellow unfortunates in this hellhole. He's a kid off to space camp, the way Jensen was, an eon or three back, when the world was innocent and he'd never killed a man nor met a kid who sold his ass for food and life.

Jensen's fucking conscience will be the death of him, someday. But not with this Jared kid, he's pretty sure.

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Re: Three Steps Past Triton (2/2)

[cassiopeia7]

♥ ! I dunno about "Cinderella," but this is a wonderful interpretation of the prompt! You made me really care about these two, so much that I'd like to see more of this.

. . . please? :D

Re: Three Steps Past Triton (2/2)

[brutti_ma_buoni]

Well, maybe more Pretty Woman, but eh. I like happy endings, even if unlikely.

I don't know there's likely to be more, but there is *potential*, you know?

[zubeneschamali]

Oh my gosh, this is fantastic. (No such thing as too much Cinderella, IMHO). Jensen's voice was sparkling clear in this, and those last two paragraphs especially show so much insight into both boys in such little space, it's amazing. Thank you!!!!!!! <3 <3 <3

[brutti_ma_buoni]

I try hard for gritty sometimes, and yet I love happy endings. So. I'm glad you like the result of my deep inner conflict! (The POV voice is influenced by another prompt that wanted Sam/Dean in Firefly, btw. Jensen isn't Mal Reynolds here, but they're spiritual cousins. Especially glad that part worked for you.)

[brutti_ma_buoni]

So, uh, eventually this comment fic turned into a full-length fic. And it's all thanks to space comment fic and, ultimately, your prompt. Here, if you'd like to read more...

Re: Three Steps Past Triton (2/2)

[snickfic]

Awww! I liked this a lot. Jared, getting his chance.

Re: Three Steps Past Triton (2/2)

[brutti_ma_buoni]

*g* Schmoopy hooker fic, I am your author. *headdesk* Still, I like the characters here, glad you did too!

[deirdre_c]

Ai, I'm sorry I'm so late in responding, I was away all weekend with horrible internet access. But I was able to read this on my phone and it sunk its hooks in me DEEP, I tell you. Such a cool concept and such wonderful execution (tremendous character voices for both boys)!!!

And: "But, sir? Am I not allowed to fuck you on board?" And he looks upset, undecided even.

Eeeeeee! MFEO!!! \o/

I could read about these two forever. *_*

[brutti_ma_buoni]

I *may* write some more of this. Thinking about it, anyway. I'm still kind of dabbling in SPN and mostly writing shorts and comment fic, but this might just have legs. We'll see.

[deirdre_c]

Well, let me know if I can bribe you with fresh-baked cookies or pictures of Jared shirtless or anything else that might urge you along in this direction. ;)

[brutti_ma_buoni]

This is now a very long time ago, but despite the total absence of shirtless Jared pictures, I did write a full-length fic about these two. Which, ultimately, is due to this comment ficathon and its luscious prompts. The proper story is here, if you'd like to read it.

[deirdre_c]

Wow, that's fantastic news! It's a crazy time of year, but I'm definitely bookmarking this for a read. I love this original snippet and can't wait to hear where you've taken them! :)

[hunters_retreat]

This was amazing! And I'm on board with everyone else who said they could read more :P I loved how Jensen knew Jared was out of place and was willing to take a chance on him. And I love that Jared wants to go so bad, but he still wants to sleep with Jensen if he can :P And I love that Jensen takes him along even if it isn't the smart thing to do but he follows his gut :P

[brutti_ma_buoni]

Thanks so much! There may just be more of this, but we'll see how it goes. I'm not so great at writing long.

[brutti_ma_buoni]

Very, very belatedly, I can say proudly, there is more to this story. In fact, 20000 words more... Here, if you'd like to read it!