Art Prompt Fanfic: The Future is Ours to Make

[deinonychus_1]

Title: The Future is Ours to Make

Comments

[lukadreaming]

Yay for Connor finally making clear to Abby how he feels. And I like the way the story reflects Connor's loyalty to Cutter and how he feels he has to keep investigating.

[deinonychus_1]

Thanks. I just wish Connor had managed to stand up to Abby like that in the show!

[goldarrow]

Beautiful.
Beautifully written, beautifully plotted, beautifully resolved.

[deinonychus_1]

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.

[reggietate]

I'd love to have seen this happen in the show :-) Bravo! A terrific story.

[deinonychus_1]

Thanks. I wish they had got more pro-active about investigating the artefact, especially once they suspected it may have come from the future world, and they had what seemed to be a stable, open anomaly to it.

[reggietate]

Oh, absolutely. As it was, it ended up a kind of McGuffin. I can see why, in a way, because it would give the ARC so much control over the anomaly situation that there wouldn't be any creatures to wrangle, and thus, bang goes half the show.. But such importance was made of it when Cutter died, I wanted it to be much more significant than it turned out to be. We need more fic exploring that angle, I think. Lots more, actually :-D

[mysteriousaliwz]

Aww, Connor! Abby may have been the one to do most of the heroic rescue thing this time, but Connor was the brave one when it came to insisting on clarifying where they stood when it came to their relationship.

Lovely story.

[deinonychus_1]

Thanks. Yes, it took a lot of bravery, and a slight amount of blood loss and mortal peril, for Connor to finally stand up to Abby about the way she was treating him. I just wish we had seen this happen in the show.

[fififolle]

Eeeeeee!! Wonderful So very Connor. Great title! And having seen the artwork, I love what you did with it.

[deinonychus_1]

Thanks! I'm still not a hundred per cent sold on the title, but I ran out of time and had to call it something, lol!