Fic: Merlin; G/PG; Equilibrium - Chapter 6

[definewisdom]

Title: Equilibrium (6/9 + Epilogue)
Fandom: Merlin
Rating: G/PG
Wordcount: This part: 5369, Overall ~44000
Pairing/Characters: Merlin, Arthur, Percival (OC), Gaius, Uther
Disclaimer: I do not own Merlin, nor any of the characters. The version of Arthurian legend this was inspired by/based on belongs to the Beeb.
Warnings: Vague corruption of

Comments

[rainchild]

Yay, another chapter! Arthur and Merlin are just adorable together, fighting over the bed.

[mariana_oconnor]

^_^ I had to get that scene in. It was bugging me. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks

[rose_walker22]

Oh My God! I hope Arthur's ok!
Damn Nimueh and Percival. He just annoys me now. Serves you right.
Poor Arthur though!
The bed 'scene' was hilarious though. I'm sure they would have found a comfortable way to lie eventually!
Can't wait for next chapter!

[mariana_oconnor]

Thanks...

As for Arthur, you'll find out soon.

I'm glad you liked it.

review: Equilibrium

[drikadas]

Man, I can't believe I read it all non-stop! And now I'm all anxious about the next chapter.
I loved Percival, he's really a normal guy who just have no clue about the whereabouts of royalty. With his previous life, who can blame him. I hope Merlin or Arthur can talk to him before things got too dangerous for him. ^^"
Arthur and Merlin have both great caracterization and I felt like reading a script for the series so easly I could picture them in my mind.
Just one question: on the summary there're only the main characters but no pairings. Are this fic a gen one? Or is it gonna be a arthurxmerlin or other pairings? Not that any of it will stop me from reading the next chapters. ;)
Anyway, thanks for the wonderful fic! o/

Oh, I'm brazilian and my english sucks, sorry for any mistakes.

Re: review: Equilibrium

[drikadas]

Nevermind!
Searching for other fics I found this:
Pairing/Characters: Ensemble, eventual Merlin/Arthur, plus male OC sort

Dumb me! ¬¬ Thanks!

Re: review: Equilibrium

[mariana_oconnor]

Thanks! ^_^ I'm glad you think I've got the characterisation. with shorter things I tend to work on characterisation the most, but adding plot into the mix is a little daunting.

(you've already answered your own question, but I feel like I should add something - it's not going to get higher than PG... but there is a little Arthur/Merlin at the end, because I had to. I've been trying to get them together all fic and they pointed out I should really wait until Arthur was back in the right body before I hooked them up... so yes, light slash later)

And don't worry about your English, it's fine. ^_^