Comments | defincubus27: this a story i wrote last night

defincubus27

this a story i wrote last night

Feb 08, 2005 21:19

All I Want is You

As the pen hits the paper to write another requiem in your honor

I think to myself all times I felt loved, when in your arms

And I realize there’s not a word to describe the turmoil I have made for myself

The bed I have made is filled with thorns and broken glass covered in a blanket of hopes and dreams

This is where I lay me ( Read more... )

Comments 4

maripoppinpills February 9 2005, 08:41:37 UTC

I liked it very much. You have talent.

-kry-

hey defincubus27 February 9 2005, 08:49:31 UTC

thank you
tj
avo

Hey Teege anonymous February 9 2005, 10:56:11 UTC

Hey Teege... that was awesome.. That was really good... And just remember.. I'll always be waiting...
Love always,
~Thumper~

thequiet_1 February 11 2005, 13:38:56 UTC

Tj all I have to say is WOW AND WOW again! I read it to my mom and she said that you could make it into a song! Like a song inspired from a story! But I love it!

Love
Amber<3