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deeperintodark

Under Streetlights-Chapter Twenty

Jul 22, 2008 17:01

Title: Under Streetlights ( Read more... )

Comments 11

midge62680 July 22 2008, 21:17:14 UTC

One thing comes to mind after reading this chapter:

AW!!!!!!!!

I find something psychologically interesting about how you're developing Ville's character. Here he is, a veritable child, who knows more about certain "things" than anyone, no matter their age, EVER should, and yet, is completely inept when it comes to social skills, love, and life in general. It's a dichotomy that not many people delve into when writing these sort of fics (usually it's all "oh poor baby! Let me kiss it and make it better!" Not that that's a bad thing, but I think you get what I mean), and I'm thrilled that you're going for it. Bravo my love. :-)

♥

deeperintodark July 22 2008, 21:25:09 UTC

Midge, my love, I just want to let you know that I look forward to your reviews.

I love fics like that too, but right here, for me, I didn't feel like I could write Ville like that. This was the way he had to unfold in my mind.

Thank you so much, precious!

Hearts, stars, and horseshoes.

midge62680 July 23 2008, 03:59:02 UTC

Aw, sweetheart! I'm honored, and as I'm sure you know already, I ALWAYS look forward to your updates! :-)

I think that the way his character is unfolding is just perfect; it makes him that much more "grittier," and more realistic, so to speak.

No, thank YOU! :-)

*giggles*
I love hearts, stars and horseshoes!

*snuggles*

♥

meduusje July 22 2008, 21:18:32 UTC

adorable!

deeperintodark July 22 2008, 22:29:19 UTC

Thank you!

slasher48 July 22 2008, 21:30:32 UTC

I love this chapter.

Really.

Because I've been there.

(Not as a prostitute, but you know what I mean.)

You feel really guilty when you can't pay 'em back.

I love you so much! Keep it up, love!

deeperintodark July 22 2008, 22:30:37 UTC

Yeah, you always do feel guilty.

Love you, too.

slasher48 July 23 2008, 00:25:41 UTC

I do.

Major love. :)

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deeperintodark July 23 2008, 04:40:28 UTC

I adore you, as well.

More of this quite soon, I promise.

6loving6death6 July 23 2008, 14:53:52 UTC

This was a good way to start my day. Reading one of your beautiful stories.

I absolutley love how Bam is taking in Ville. It is cute and funny at the same time!

Please UD soon!

deeperintodark July 23 2008, 16:18:43 UTC

I try to make it entertaining, to say the least.

I will update very soon.