Hawaii Five-0 fic: 'Family business', 1/?

[deepbluemermaid]

Title: 'Family business', chapter 1/? (WIP).
Pairings: Danny/Steve, with background Kono/Chin.
Rating: PG-13 for this chapter; NC-17 overall, for sexual content.
Spoilers: only minor ones for Season 1 episodes - it's an AU where Danny arrives in Hawaii after Steve does, and isn't a member of Five-0.
Word count: 4,200 words for this chapter.

Comments

[elrhiarhodan]

Oh, I love this.

I hope you're bitten by a really virulent plot bunny and just HAVE to finish this.

(You know, the only H50 fic I read is yours).

[deepbluemermaid]

Hee, thank you dear :) This is an especially rabid plotbunny - why is it the crackiest ideas that just won't let me be? So I'd filled up a good chunk of my writing notebook before ever sitting down to type.

[simplyn2deep]

when you first mentioned this, I was rather anxious and hopeful to read it.

You've got a great start and I can't wait to read more of it!

[deepbluemermaid]

Thank you! I don't think I've ever felt this nervous about posting a story before, so I really appreciate your encouragement :)

[simplyn2deep]

There may be people who find the topic something they're uncomfortable with, but I think it's interesting. A better written episode of Maury where this man and woman were engaged but before they got married, they needed to find out if they were siblings. I don't remember how the episode ended, but I like this much better.

[silmanumenel]

Just wanted to say that I love the premise for this story, and though I don't have time at the moment, I'll definitely read it. Once again, your idea is just so original, and I already know that it's going to be amazing. :) And thanks for the warnings, especially the spoilery one, because I know myself and that I'd have fretted a lot if I hadn't read it. I'll leave a more detailed comment once I've actually read the story. ;)

[liltinglyric]

can't wait for the next installment!

[deepbluemermaid]

Thank you :)

[jazzybabe56]

oh this is a very interesting twist on their story - I am enjoying this very much! :)

[deepbluemermaid]

Thanks so much for saying so :)