Comments | dee_bloom218: My first fic

dee_bloom218

My first fic

Jan 10, 2008 20:12

Ok guys, this is a first for me. Constructive criticism is more than welcome but please don't be like "HURR THIS BLOWS ASS CHUNKS XCOR4E HURR" cause then I'll never post again D: and since I recently signed up for The Wedding Planner at
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fic: j2

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dee_bloom218 January 11 2008, 02:31:57 UTC

Thanks sweetie! And I totally just realized that I forgot to give you credit for editing this ;)

*goes and fixes*

giventofly37 January 11 2008, 02:05:50 UTC

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! Totally cute, I love it. :D

dee_bloom218 January 11 2008, 02:34:22 UTC

Yay!! Thanks so much XD

iknowitsmad January 11 2008, 03:40:03 UTC

Honestly? This is really good, Deeana. And very cute.

dee_bloom218 January 11 2008, 05:01:54 UTC

Thanks so much Brina! :)

crooked January 11 2008, 05:01:08 UTC

d'awwwwwwww!! this is way CUTE, sweets! omg SPOONS ♥

dee_bloom218 January 11 2008, 05:03:25 UTC

XD Thankies soo much! Omg I LOVE being the big spoon [or the little spoon, or the middle spoon for that matter :D]

crooked January 11 2008, 06:06:28 UTC

as long as you're some part of the silverware equation, i think it's all good. ;D

dee_bloom218 January 11 2008, 07:10:42 UTC

I fully agree. Especially if I'm part of the forking part first...followed by the spooning >.>

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psh what? naff January 11 2008, 13:58:37 UTC

it's totally cute. you have nothing to worry about.

Psh whatever, go make out with your boyfriend :P dee_bloom218 January 11 2008, 14:48:34 UTC

Yay! Apparently I worry too much? Meh.