My first fic
Ok guys, this is a first for me. Constructive criticism is more than welcome but please don't be like "HURR THIS BLOWS ASS CHUNKS XCOR4E HURR" cause then I'll never post again D: and since I recently signed up for The Wedding Planner at
abouttwoboys, I need to be able to write more. So yea. Go forth, children, read and comment. Please?
Spoons
Jensen/Jared
PG, 175
Post-coitus, Jared nervously pops a question.
Disclaimer my lovelies: I have no idea if this ever happened (outside of my head I mean)
ETA: SO much thanks to the fabulous
sazzlettefor editing this thing. (I don't believe in the use of the term 'beta'. It means the same shit!)
Breathing heavily, Jared moved his sweaty body off of Jensen and onto the fluffy cushions of the bed. The pair lay there for a moment, enjoying the comfortable silence.
"Hey, Jen?" Jared said softly, breaking the quiet.
"Yeah?"
"Would you, uh well. I mean you don’t have to but…would you mind being the big spoon tonight? I mean, it’s cool if you think it would be too awkward, I know I’m basically a giant but"
Jared's words were cut off suddenly because Jensen shoved him onto his side and scooted up close behind him. Pressing his front to Jared’s back, Jensen wrapped his left leg up and around Jared’s hips, arms curling around him and coming to rest on Jared's chest.
"Even big guys deserve to be the little spoon sometimes" he muttered into the soft spot at the nape of Jared’s neck. And though he was facing the other way, Jensen could feel Jared break into a grin before drifting off to sleep.
abouttwoboys, I need to be able to write more. So yea. Go forth, children, read and comment. Please?
Spoons
Jensen/Jared
PG, 175
Post-coitus, Jared nervously pops a question.
Disclaimer my lovelies: I have no idea if this ever happened (outside of my head I mean)
ETA: SO much thanks to the fabulous
sazzlettefor editing this thing. (I don't believe in the use of the term 'beta'. It means the same shit!)
Breathing heavily, Jared moved his sweaty body off of Jensen and onto the fluffy cushions of the bed. The pair lay there for a moment, enjoying the comfortable silence.
"Hey, Jen?" Jared said softly, breaking the quiet.
"Yeah?"
"Would you, uh well. I mean you don’t have to but…would you mind being the big spoon tonight? I mean, it’s cool if you think it would be too awkward, I know I’m basically a giant but"
Jared's words were cut off suddenly because Jensen shoved him onto his side and scooted up close behind him. Pressing his front to Jared’s back, Jensen wrapped his left leg up and around Jared’s hips, arms curling around him and coming to rest on Jared's chest.
"Even big guys deserve to be the little spoon sometimes" he muttered into the soft spot at the nape of Jared’s neck. And though he was facing the other way, Jensen could feel Jared break into a grin before drifting off to sleep.